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Hot!
Loved the story. Looking forward to more
Building up!!
Ebonymistress
Great start to a story with a difference. Take your time and spin it out for all of us.
Murda
What absolute rubbish!
Why can't people write any more?!!!
Absolute piffle - terrible dialogue, ridiculous "plot" - please take some writing classes before you submit again.
LWD
Great story line!
I was totally into the story, and was wanting more when you ended. Looking forward towards chapter 2. Thanks! B
bad
This story was not good at all. The writing was terrible. Proof read your work!!!
Excellent start!
I love stories involving dominant black lesbian women, especially when they're paired with submissive young white women, like the blonde, blue-eyes secretaries in your story! I see great potential here! This particular story didn't go very far, but it certainly piqued my interest, which is more than I can say for MUCH of the so-called erotica on this site!
Hope for more.
I hope that you continue. I was really getting into the story. Great Work.
Great Beginning
I really like your story idea. It seems like a great start, I hope you plan on continuing? Others were harsh in their criticism, they were too cruel. Watch your grammer and mispelled words. I think you write pretty good. Keep working on this story. Don't let the negative words from others stop you. Peace Syn'
hot
This story was great. It made me so wet and horny. Please write anoter.
hot
please right more! this was so good! I'm so wet now because of this
Unfinished :(
I read this story when it was new in 06. This has to be the HOTTEST interracial girl on girl story uncompleted. I hope something didn't happen to the author? Somebody needs to complete this WOW. I'm harder than Chisnese Algebra!!!!
Please Finish This
I hope you will finish this fine piece. I can see so many possibilities in the future in this story. Please consider finishing this story. Thank you.
Interesting. ..
Concept - I have an idea what Trisha's duties will entail but I want to see how the story will play out, but for now all I can say is I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.
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