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Heart Keeper

byMany Feathers©
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by Anonymous

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by AnnaVenus6904/10/06

My love, my heart

You are the most amazing person I have ever had the privilege to meet. Your poem is beautiful, but not as beautiful as you.You blow my mind!

Thank you so much for my new name, I will wear it humbly and with pride. Your sweet heart will always be safe with me, sheltered and nurtured...as will you!
I love you
xxxxx
your Anna, your Heart Keeper

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by My Erotic Trail04/10/06

heart felt

I truely enjoyed this read, (~_~)

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by PatHous5604/10/06

Wonderful

Great feelings expressed in this sweet love poem. Lovers, though apart, remain together as one. Patricia

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by EmJ038504/11/06

A Love Poem!!

So wonderful---these feelings of love you speak of here---where two truly feel as one.

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by OSoBuff04/11/06

Well said!!!

The way I feel about the person who reflects me and truly sees me!!! Wonderful words that say it better than I ever thought. tks

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by CaPic26704/11/06

So seductive

With words so fine I could get lost in your spell and never know it...or mind it. A nice soft romantic touch in a hard often bitter world. CP

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by LeBroz04/11/06

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So many touching romantic writes between yours and Anna's. Sharing your feelings before your entire public. Hope the story never ends.

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by Volupia04/16/06

I am envious

of the love between you and your Anna, which you so generously share with us all. May you always love like this, may you never stop sharing. (xxx)

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by Beam_of_lite04/21/06

You have

found your gift Many Feathers and I have found mine.For each of us to find the one who we will share the rest of our lives with at almost the same time...well all I can say is that the spirits have each brought a special sunbeam into our lives.My wonderful friend my heart is happy for you.

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by sybilrose04/21/06

To trust your heart to someone

What a specail gift you give. Love the poem !

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by champagne198204/21/06

ahh love

No one can argue with the sentiment of your poem and I enjoyed the way you told the story. My one drawback with it was that your rhymes weren't very subtle.
I hope you develop this lyrical poetry skill you have further. There is marvellous potential hiding in your muse.

Carrie

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