Keep up the good work. This story set the scene nicely and followed it through to the conclusion. It sounds like the main character probably has more stories to tell, and I for one hope she will.
Today I washed my bed linens and hung them out to dry in the spring breeze. When I crawl in bed tonight and enjoy the fresh smell of clean sheets, I'll think back to the time when I found love and happiness in the park. Thanks for your story, I enjoyed it.
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I'll bring the flowers...
Meet me in the park, I'm cumming with you - loved it!
Nice effort
Keep up the good work. This story set the scene nicely and followed it through to the conclusion. It sounds like the main character probably has more stories to tell, and I for one hope she will.
Good one
The best way to celebrate Earth Day!
Great Story
I enjoyed the story very much. I too am a child of the 70's and your story brought back some memories. Thanks, Ntxn
Great story
You run the theme through this story well, and the combination of voyeur and first time experience clicks nicely
oh, yeah, part of ~my~ youth...
It was very nice! Took me back to 1970 and my hippie days. {sigh} Thanks!
A touch of Nostalgia
Loved it. The narrative pulled me along and I thoroughly enjoyed the ride. Good luck in the contest.
EXCELLENT !
Today I washed my bed linens and hung them out to dry in the spring breeze. When I crawl in bed tonight and enjoy the fresh smell of clean sheets, I'll think back to the time when I found love and happiness in the park. Thanks for your story, I enjoyed it.
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