The Two Couples: Prolog

nice work

hey keep it up, no writer has ever taken this topic

good going

it is poised interestingly now.... hope you can kee the momentum, looking forward to reading the part two

Fine start

Fine man, waiting for other chapters

Lovely narration

Dear Jadway,

We Indians and Pakistanis write terribly with some exception like yours. You are a passionate wife lover like me. Your story "The Two Couples - Prologue" was lovely. I would like you also to read my stories. "Indian couples in loving threesome with a male friend" and other stories. you could clickon my name and see my submissions. I do hope you read them and write back.
Love you,
Raj,
iloveall

Good narration. Lets see of the main story is intresting enougj. 3 stars to start with. Idea seems great. Fingures crossed.

Memories for ever

Very nice story and excellent narration.

When, Where & How do.I get to read the remaining parts?

The WHEN, WHERE & HOW DO I GET TO READ THE REMANING PARTS?