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This is what I love to read--It's erotic and it's.
..believable. What more could you ask
very Hott
This story is a fantasy of mine,,, It was well written... enough for me to picture what was going on... It was great... ty for your story... Larry
nice :-)
this story got me to the point of no return... its a real fantasy of mine... ty... Larry
outstanding
I've been involved with Literotica as a reader and a writer for four years now, so I've seen just about everything, good, bad and ugly.
So it's real delight to read a story that is truly original, with a unique concept that is fully realized. Not to mention that it's hot as hell.
It's also very well written, without any glaring errors, the story flows well and keeps the reader's interest. I also liked the ironic tone. You don't take yourself too seriously, and that's a good thing.
Congrats on an very good job.
Me likey
When is the next one?
looking forward to it.
One of THE Finest Ever
OMG- That was one of THE finest stories ever. I've read tons of stuff on Lit and this one ranks in the top 5. I can just imagine my wife and I with our friends and I REALLY CAN imagine it, but after this ultra hot story then WOW. So damn believable. LUV it and can't WAIT for the follow up to this great story. Many thanks ..Tim
LOve your story!
This is one of the best stories loved it cause it takes time getting there!
masterbation
woe loved this story there has to be another part when can i see that
Good story
Just read your story and it is really good. I can just about see that mutual masturbation scene. My wife and I do that quite often and it is extremely exciting for both of us.
so-so
Gave it a five. But it was actually a 5-. I'm into watching women masturbate, but I guess not stories about it. Used to live in a duplex when first married. Another young cpl lived next door. Our wives got us to videoing ourselves masturbating and fucking and then trading with the neighbors. This was VHS, '80's. Never saw each other naked in person. And the good thing was (thouh we didn't realize it till later) that back then there was no Facebook worry. That one of us would get drunk or high and do something stupid on the computer. Personal Computers at that time used MS DOS and 51/2" floppy drives. But this story was fun.
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