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Sweet Revenge

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by Nightowl2204/18/06

Excellent!

This is a great beginning of a historical novel. Your writing is very good and flows well. The storyline is already interesting and I think it will remain so. I am waiting for the next chapter already! And I would guess that you HAVE been kissed.

Now we know he is abducting her. Can this Bryant actually be the Sheik Rashid? Another Lawrence of Arabia?
He may have some evil plan with her being involved but it will change. She is too perfect to defile regardless of his feelings about her father.

Little haremgirl, and student, I like your writing.

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by Anonymous04/18/06

Obviously Haremgirl is NOT

Be nice if you guys would not pretend to be female

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by Anonymous04/18/06

GREAT

Thanks for the great read, I really got pulled into the story, and in my mind can picture the characters and setting,thank you for sharing.I would love to read more installments.

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by Anonymous04/18/06

Sweet Revenge

What are you doing? Your style of writing is to good for here. You should be writing real books not wasting your talent here. I don't know if you will start writing all the sex scenes like everyone else, I havn't read your other stories yet, but this was like a 'proper' story. thank you
JG

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by LadyFalcon04/18/06

Wow! Please tell me there is another chapter?!

Oh my! I was really mad when I clicked on "Next" and nothing happened! This is very good. Please submit a new chapter soon. I will console myself with reading your other works if you have any. Thanks and please hurry! :-)

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by Anonymous04/19/06

You are fantastic!

I have always enjoyed your stories and am so pleased to see the beginnings of a new one hit literotica! You are by far my favorite author on the site and I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this story.

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by Anonymous04/19/06

Awesome

Cant wait for the next chapter

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by txrosenaynay04/20/06

done only....

as our haremgirl could do...wonderfully. Thank you and so looking forward to once again, so it seems...a wonderfully,passionate,hot hot story. Thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

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by Anonymous05/17/06

Sorry...

...I got as far as the first scene in Cairo and gave up. For someone who purports to be a historical writer to call Sir Evelyn Baring "Sir Baring" rather tha "Sir Evelyn" is totally inexcusable - do your research properly!

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by 05/20/06

You write so wonderfully I had to

come back and start this one at the beginning. For any who look at tiny details of a story and get nit picky sometimes it's not easy writing a story of this length and this intricate of a storyline. Try writing one yourself before you throw fits about simple things.

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by northbaybear06/25/06

You're writing is marvelous--Surprised myself!

I'm a middle-aged guy who has always ridiculed romance stories. It turns out I love them, and certainly yours for the strong characters, both men and women, the excellent plot, and the hot, hot and realistic physical love scenes. Oh, how I long to be in such a relationship as the ones you describe. Are they only found in fiction? Write on, dear lady. Write on! And, thank you.

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by Anonymous12/20/08

Interesting!

Your story started off very exciting! I really couldn't take my eyes off the screen! I am looking forward to the rest of the story! Interesting beginning!

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by Anonymous11/01/12

Plethora of Lords

Seems a bit odd that there should have been as many Lords in Egypt as in London. Was the House of Lords having its annual seaside holiday in Alexandria?

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by Anonymous12/26/15

I liked this story when I first came across it several years ago......

In a Harlequin romance novel!!!!!

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