All Comments on 'Woman In Heat'

A bit short. Are the two of you married to others? I'm not sure about this one without much of a build-up. Could have been much better. Maybe needs a continuation?

About 3/4 page too long

Kind of an odd section to put this in..

I didn't think it was a 'control' thing.

I did like it.

A bit short.

It was well written if a little short. I really enjoyed the way it skirted between consent and non-consent. It asks the question of how much consent is necessary...at what point do you have to ask your partner if it is alright to continue.

To me this short story did not fit the description of the category. It wasn't rough or forced, there was a little "after sex foreplay" with the biting but even that was gentle and the rest simply described the experience some women have the first time they have anal sex.

Love it Baby. It has happened to most of us I think. We are friends on Flickr

Charlene

A hot vignette. Interesting how something relaxed and easy-going can suddenly transmute to something rough and edgy, isn't it? Nice work.