Many Feathers:
Well told, easy reading, and a beautiful ending. Thank You. Ronnie W.
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Anonymous04/19/06
Don't stop now
The surprise ending with the earrings gets me to hoping that there is a couple more chapters. Please don't leave us hanging like this as just that one sentence brought me to attention.
you have me in awe, you know that? What a sweet, wonderful, incredibly sexy story, I loved it. And that ending...damn Many Feathers...now I'll never be able to stop wondering!
All my Love xxx Your Anna
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Anonymous04/19/06
Great story
Well written and great story - hope the saga will continue before long, can't wait
this ranks right up there with your best, if not your best.
And WOW! Thats saying something! Begs to be finished....
You get another feather.
Thank you,
Dave
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Anonymous12/03/06
please more of this
great story, please dont leave us hanging in midair, this one kept me on the edge of my seat, especially the unspoken twist at the end. this one has a future.
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Anonymous04/29/07
hot
Something tells me it wasn't mom that went out shopping!!!!
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Anonymous05/28/07
diamond
What a pointe at the end. This story certainly has a lot of raffinesse and I really liked it in many ways.
HOT SEX as dear Auntie teaches the boy where it's at! This tale demonstrates family togetherness. Nobody here seems to like wearing clothes or just hanging on to their own gonads. Ah, well, sex is better after proper instruction, right? And it's supposed to be fun.
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Anonymous12/26/09
Wow
GREAT STORY,I was hoping ,that he makes love to his mother.lovely ending please add some more to this beautiful sexy tail . The next time SIS comes to visit they spend the night in each others arms. only later to discover that both wemon are naked & he is given the choice of door #1 or #2 ,which is no problem for him ,until he discovers that neither woman has ear rings,and he cant hide his erection..PLEASE PLEASE more along this line ....
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Anonymous02/12/12
Who was it?
Did Aunt Eva take her brother in law to the airport and it was her sister that made love with Mark in that dark secluded spot in the corner of the yard? Was there a "switch" made? Mark felt differences but failed to pick up on them. Did he unknowingly make love with his mother?
Well told, with the right amount of eroticism, and a little fillip at the end! Makes me wonder if it was the mother and not Sis he made love to in the night. The last line alludes to it. That is a great way to inflame the imagination. Kudos to you for a great story!!
A very well written story with just the right amount of suspense at the end. Was there a suggestion that there was more to come with mother and son??? I sincerely hope so.
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Anonymous11/04/12
Nope, was it aunt at the last or was it mom :)
I think the last long loving sex was with his mom!
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Anonymous03/21/13
great story
love the ending. After reading it again i'm positive he did make love to his mother in the end. The story was so well done sensual erotic and hot all in one. This story got my heart racing :)
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Anonymous03/24/13
one of the best
Very passionate and surprising.
Nice thing for both sides boy and women.....
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Anonymous07/27/13
Lovely
Great that Mark didn't figure it out. Loved that. :)
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Anonymous06/06/15
Nice twist you twisted wonderful writer! Love to see a second chapter.
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Anonymous07/30/15
hmmmm
You know, there are some unknowns here. My Big question (in the back of my mind) is: did mom ever actually ever give the earrings back to Eva during all that time? Was that actually his Mother who taught him all that he'd ever need to know to keep a woman happy? Or maybe Aunt Sissy did take his virginity that night and traded back and forth with his mom. The sisters swapping earrings back and forth would keep him a little off-balance as to who is who, so they could run the game they wanted to. They could also do a little detective work that way. Mom pretending to be Aunt Sis might get Dad to admit to something unwittingly that he might not say to his wife.Yes, the Twins, the earrings, two cheating husbands, and a relatively naive young man make for interesting combinations. I like this very much!
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Anonymous10/05/16
SO HE ENDED UP FUCKING HIS MOM
AND DID NOT REALISE IT...WONDER HOW LONG BEFORE SHE TELLS HIM....AND THEN LETS HIM CONTINUE HAVING HER....
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Anonymous01/23/17
Wow!!!
Talk about leaving someone wanting more. I'm very curious to know whether he fucked his until or mother. Thank you for writing this. Please write a Chapter 2.
Another great one
Many Feathers:
Well told, easy reading, and a beautiful ending. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Don't stop now
The surprise ending with the earrings gets me to hoping that there is a couple more chapters. Please don't leave us hanging like this as just that one sentence brought me to attention.
More
Sounds like a little twist there at the end. I hope to hear more from this story.
another amazing story!
you have me in awe, you know that? What a sweet, wonderful, incredibly sexy story, I loved it. And that ending...damn Many Feathers...now I'll never be able to stop wondering!
All my Love xxx Your Anna
Great story
Well written and great story - hope the saga will continue before long, can't wait
OOohhhhhh Noble One......
this ranks right up there with your best, if not your best.
And WOW! Thats saying something! Begs to be finished....
You get another feather.
Thank you,
Dave
please more of this
great story, please dont leave us hanging in midair, this one kept me on the edge of my seat, especially the unspoken twist at the end. this one has a future.
hot
Something tells me it wasn't mom that went out shopping!!!!
diamond
What a pointe at the end. This story certainly has a lot of raffinesse and I really liked it in many ways.
A Classic MF ending
and a great great story for a rainy day in Beijing.
Thanks RL... now i have to try and find the sequel if any.
Wow
That was fantastic. Please keep giving us more great stories like this.
Aunt Sex Teacher
HOT SEX as dear Auntie teaches the boy where it's at! This tale demonstrates family togetherness. Nobody here seems to like wearing clothes or just hanging on to their own gonads. Ah, well, sex is better after proper instruction, right? And it's supposed to be fun.
Wow
GREAT STORY,I was hoping ,that he makes love to his mother.lovely ending please add some more to this beautiful sexy tail . The next time SIS comes to visit they spend the night in each others arms. only later to discover that both wemon are naked & he is given the choice of door #1 or #2 ,which is no problem for him ,until he discovers that neither woman has ear rings,and he cant hide his erection..PLEASE PLEASE more along this line ....
Who was it?
Did Aunt Eva take her brother in law to the airport and it was her sister that made love with Mark in that dark secluded spot in the corner of the yard? Was there a "switch" made? Mark felt differences but failed to pick up on them. Did he unknowingly make love with his mother?
Great Story!
Well told, with the right amount of eroticism, and a little fillip at the end! Makes me wonder if it was the mother and not Sis he made love to in the night. The last line alludes to it. That is a great way to inflame the imagination. Kudos to you for a great story!!
Fabulous Story
A very well written story with just the right amount of suspense at the end. Was there a suggestion that there was more to come with mother and son??? I sincerely hope so.
Nope, was it aunt at the last or was it mom :)
I think the last long loving sex was with his mom!
great story
love the ending. After reading it again i'm positive he did make love to his mother in the end. The story was so well done sensual erotic and hot all in one. This story got my heart racing :)
one of the best
Very passionate and surprising.
Nice thing for both sides boy and women.....
Lovely
Great that Mark didn't figure it out. Loved that. :)
Nice twist you twisted wonderful writer! Love to see a second chapter.
hmmmm
You know, there are some unknowns here. My Big question (in the back of my mind) is: did mom ever actually ever give the earrings back to Eva during all that time? Was that actually his Mother who taught him all that he'd ever need to know to keep a woman happy? Or maybe Aunt Sissy did take his virginity that night and traded back and forth with his mom. The sisters swapping earrings back and forth would keep him a little off-balance as to who is who, so they could run the game they wanted to. They could also do a little detective work that way. Mom pretending to be Aunt Sis might get Dad to admit to something unwittingly that he might not say to his wife.Yes, the Twins, the earrings, two cheating husbands, and a relatively naive young man make for interesting combinations. I like this very much!
SO HE ENDED UP FUCKING HIS MOM
AND DID NOT REALISE IT...WONDER HOW LONG BEFORE SHE TELLS HIM....AND THEN LETS HIM CONTINUE HAVING HER....
Wow!!!
Talk about leaving someone wanting more. I'm very curious to know whether he fucked his until or mother. Thank you for writing this. Please write a Chapter 2.
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