This hodgepodge of letters ( I won't even call it writing) is just so much bullshit! Fantasy is one thing, but this doesn't even qualify as that.
This guy gets his nuts kicked to the size of basketballs and he's gonna come back for another round in two days? Obviously, you've never been kicked in the nuts!
Try writing recipes! You'll have better luck.
English
great story
You need revenge and do mom in the ass
Garbage!
This hodgepodge of letters ( I won't even call it writing) is just so much bullshit! Fantasy is one thing, but this doesn't even qualify as that.
This guy gets his nuts kicked to the size of basketballs and he's gonna come back for another round in two days? Obviously, you've never been kicked in the nuts!
Try writing recipes! You'll have better luck.
Sweet
Hey, it's fantasy. Just make sure that he puts her totally in her place in the next chapter.
great story
hot story write more chapters don't listen to that comment they wrote they are ones who not good
Reader's Comments
I appreciate the feedback. Sorry the stories aren't longer, but I do not have much time to write them out. Hope some of you enjoy them though.
My favorite
Still my favorite story after so many years.
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