I love the idea of our self-created worlds going on even when we aren't thinking about them. Especially liked the line about "meeting God" and finding out he doesn't know how things work. LOL. Looking forward to how Karen functions in the Real world.
I happened on this by chance. My head hurts too much of late to do alot of reading, but this is one I HAD to read. While I didn't care for the Power Ranger scene, (personal preference), it was well executed. I love how your imagination works, and I'm thrilled you have the skill required to get the job done. May I borrow this idea, if inspiration ever strikes?
I won't be entering this contest, for medical reasons, though I do intend to get back to writing soon. I wish you luck in this contest, Sean. You are an inspiration to many people, myself included. *KISS* ~Minx
Just as creative and imaginative (and amusing) as the first. Great job!
I am patiently waiting for the ending of this series. I wann know what's going to happen. you know, buecause I am a fan.
Looking forward to see if one of the female characters crossed over into Reality. If this really could happen to me I would never come back to this world ever again. I like the idea of being in a world that I created and can control by thought and action alone.
You've just described what I've fantasized about, though in very different ways: Jumping yourself into one of your stories. Sometimes I wish I could do that when I've plotted myself into a corner, because a dues ex machina is SO much easier than either plotting your way out or admitting you went down a blind alley and having to back up anywhere from a couple of thousand to several thousand words to go in the direction you should have gone to begin with. Enjoyable story, though.
Always listen to your characters when they talk. They often know the story better than you do!
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