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Strong Work Author
Hot, arousing and to the point - very nice effort author which displayed your talent and sensitivities with great flow.
Thanks - With High Regard
Now this is a loving wife story!
Nice job of throwing in the tension... and then relieving it.
Regards, DJ
Great
This is how married love should be. Thanks for your story.
Boyd
Yes, married sex is...
...predictable even when it is hot and satisfying, but that is the beauty of it. Two people that know what each other wants and likes - and are willing to do what it takes to satisfy the other. Getting an extra jolt of satisfaction from satisfying the love of your life - that is married sex and that is what is shown here. Gawd, how I miss it!
What love is all about
Jack:
You've told it as it is, but more important how it should be when the storms of life begin to cast the marriage ship upon the rocks and shoals. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Good story
I really enjoyed it.
No wimps, no wierdos, no sluts.
A refreshing change on Literotica.
Wonderful
A great little love lesson with some great sex added.
Very good story!! Makes a man jealous.
Well done story
Anothter Loving wife.
Great Writing
Great story content too. Like the one person said. This is a true "loving Wife" story instead of the usual cum eating wimp shit that is offered in the category. I wish they had a category for cheating wives and leave loving wives to this type story.
Great Job Jack.
Damn fine passionate romance.
Life is good when two people really love each other.
Thank you for the memorable uplift.
Lovely
Thank you, this was a refreshing change. The story was perfect for the category of LOVING wife. Whenever there's a cheating wife story, the spouse who cheats "excuse" their behavior with "you didn't pay attention to me--you were working too much--we're having too many arguments--you missed our children's activities, etc. etc." This is never an excuse to be unfaithful. It's called life.
We have a winner in this couple.
Know where the story ends and stop writing.
You had a fine beginning. You raised the story question,
and increased the tension right up to where the main character walked in the door and into the bedroom. At the point where Olivia was obviously faithful and waiting for her husband, the story question was answered and your STORY was ended. You should have stopped writing at that point. What you did afterward was just describe a sex act between a man and his wife. I had no reason to want to read it because it was anticlimactic. Most married people enjoy
or have enjoyed all of what they did. By adding the sex act, you turned a STORY into a "slice of life".
Once again you have proven that you are one of the
better writers on this site. Excellent story, good plotline and very erotic. The best choice for this category. Thank you for the time and effort you took in writing this story.
The Definition of What I Think "Loving Wives"
should be. Thanks.
I liked most of...
... your story, but the salacious portions detracted from the beautiful romanticism that could have been developed with a bit of class, instead of with crassness and crude insensitivity.
Good Job
Very nice to read an erotic story under the category "Loving Wives" that's actually about loving instead of cheating.
A True Loving Wife Story!
Well wriiten and excellent display of human emotions. Enuff said!
SleeplessinMD
Shit
with such a beautiful wife --- makes the whole thing even more special, consider the fact that she teaches highly irrational, highly energetic middle schoolers, who sap all your energy by the time you get home, and still has time to get sexy like you described here --- you should be ashamed for not bringing her a dozen roses every day!
Hey Jack Straw
That is one very good story. The wife is also hot and a knockout.Glad I read it.
At Last!!!
Finally, a REAL Loving Wife! I'd like to say thanks for finally giving us a couple that can hit a rough patch in their marriage and deal with it without breaking their wedding vows. From the dozens of happily married couples out there, a big THANK YOU!!!
A Loving Wife
A true Loving Wife tale of a wife who decides to engage her husband when the going is rough. A fine tale :)
Good Story
Thanks for a good story.
Good story
The story works on several levels. Thanks, jack_straw, for reminding us how a loving wife truly is.
to all writers this a loving wife story
wife hurting or betraying hubby isn't loving wife story.this was the best of the best.
the best of them
I think you have a winner jack but if i was the husband and she came to me like the way she was dressed i would be wondering who she was with .
loved it?
where can i find one just like her?
Excellent!
Stories like this are what we need here. Loving wives. Very good work.
A Labor of love
I agree that O'Henry would have stopped with the vision of the candlelit wife. And I can imagine the insecure guy who ruins everything by grabbing his pistol and looking in the closets and under the beds. But I like the author's story as usual!
Great story!
My wife almost fits your description but she's 5' 10 1/2" and blonde and 51 years old. She's beautiful. We love each other. I just wish we made love more often than once every two or three years and missionary only. And her mouth on my cock?!? Never! So I just don't mention that. I love her enough to just forget it and jack off in the bathroom almost every day. Not bitter, just frustrated and wishin'.
1*
Old folks
Compensation
Good Story;
5* instead of 4 because of the stupid rating by DWornock.
Dwhorecuck
Your incessant ratings of 1* for 'old folks' leads me to believe you are either not yet an adult or that you are a pedophile. In either case you don't belong on this site. Don't get mad at me, I'm just drawing conclusions from the clues you leave. If not true then you need to grow up and change your tune.
Disappointing. I expected more from this writer than low level stroke story.
There is no story, just smut right thru. Disappointing.
What happened to the pizza?
Did they get to eat supper or did they have to throw the pizza away the next morning?
The guy in your story wouldn't have had to worry about a strike if they kicked out that commie union.
re: Anonymous-dissapointing...........
Smut? Oh, I get it, it didn't have cheating, disrespect, wimps, whores, sluts in it, therefore the smut. Funny, I always thought it was very erotic for a husband and wife to love each other. Strange fellow you are. Perhaps a cuckold at heart. Eh? Get the fuck out of here, this is an erotic site after all, and guys like you need not be on it.
Agree with the fellow below, supporting the quality of this story.
One request; please think up a different term than "chewing on..." different body parts. Nibbling, or some other word is much preferable to the thought of someone actually chewing on a nipple or clit.
Loved it
Very hot and touching. Thanks.
Excellent story with happiest of endings.
Team spirit, teamwork, synergy. Whatever label you hang, this is what makes a marriage a happy endeavour. I speak from firsthand experience of both types; good and bad. Anything less is miserable. All career type jobs offer their challenges from time to time. This story illustrated how events can combine to obfuscate any resemblance of happiness to job satisfaction. Gainful employment is a means to an ends and the right marriage partner can facilitate when the hell breaks loose. This story had it all, which was skillfully laid out in almost 3D. It was enjoyable to read and expertly written. Thank you!
Bravo
Great story, very refreshing, after reading all the "cuckold, swingers, and BTB"
stories. That is a REAL "Loving Wives " story.
Thanks for sharing. 5 stars.
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