and it is likely reasonable to assume the other envelope contained divorce papers.
I didn't even think to ask.
by
Anonymous04/19/06
Where did it go?
Pretty good story, but what happened? I finished with that feeling I get everytime my wife watces one of those Life Time Originals. "What the hell just happened?"
Feels like the last couple of paragraphs are missing. Good story though. I like the idea that he had to see her screwing the other guy to make sure he would never take her back again.
He was right. Where there is no trust there is no marriage. He still loves her. He just could never trust her again.
from SOL, here is how the story ends. Apparantly the last few paragraphs were truncated on Literotica:
_____________________________________ ___________________
Confrontation would only put me in denial, I would accept what you did, forgive you and then go on to lead a shitty life. I needed something that would burn so deep into my soul that I could never bring myself to look at you or speak to you again.
"The entire wife watching fantasy was bogus. I knew that seeing you with Mark would do what I needed it to do. The idea was simplicity itself. Tell you the fantasy and let you do the rest. "My God, it's perfect" you would think, "I can do it with Mark in front of him and have the best of both worlds - my lover and a stable home life." I knew you would do it when you said, "What if it turns out I like it and want to do it again." You were already setting me up so your affair could continue only in front of me instead of behind my back.
"Since you are reading this that means that the deed has been done. The fact that I didn't rush back to your car and grab the envelopes says that I found your coupling with your lover to be just as disgusting as I expected it to be. I took a day off work today and several friends helped me move out of the house. I have cancelled all of our joint credit cards. I've cleaned out and closed our savings account, but I left you what is in the checking account and two of the certificates of deposit. The other five and what would have been your half of the savings will help set me up in an apartment or condo. I think it is only fair that since you drove me away you should pick up part of the tab for my having to relocate.
"I do not want to talk to you or see you again. Don't call, don't write, don't try and catch me at work. I want nothing to do with you ever again."
I dropped the pages from my fingers and I wept. I sobbed and tears ran down my face as what I had done hit me. Dear God, how could I have been so stupid. I let a dalliance with someone I didn't even care about destroy what I had with the man I adored, the man who meant more to me than my own life.
With trembling fingers I picked up the second envelope and opened it. I let out a loud wail and sagged down on the seat and my fingers let the divorce papers fall to the floor.
i would not say anything about ur characters or story anymore... it's pretty obvious that ur female characters have no human feelings at all... whether they love someone or not.... all of ur stories show that... however, it doesn't matter... i am a bit interested in the ending part.... she tells that she would just die without dan.... well, literally, would she really be devastated that much or she would find another 'love at first sight'? I am looking forward to the depth of her love for Dan.. what she does in future.... a sequel would be good.. no, don't fear, no suggestions... we know, she will be a low-moral slut again... but, anyways, the first paragraph of the story where she stated her love for dan so strongly that her life could waste away - that was surprising... a sequel would be good...
but, u r JPB, anything, biggest shit or moderate good words, can come!!!
Where is the rest? Terrible, to get me so built up and not end it. This has to be a flaw of some sort. I will wait for the finish... but I don't think the effect will be as it should have been. Sorry. Life threw you a lemon. :(
The way you have written this tale I am unable to agree with either. Of courde Dan doesn't realize exactly how she feels but maybe he really should have found out before he tucked his tail and ran.
Kathy is absolutely wrong. I don't see anything in her defense. But since we know how she feels about Dan we really want them back together. Would she remain faithful this time? Quite possibly. But they would need a lot of counseling. It could easily be said that her former familiarity with Mark allowed her to be unfaithful. We know of noone else in her life.
So write the sequel Bob. Would love to see how you would approach it.
i have just read the ending thebullet provided... may be it was urs.... but, we all want to know what happens to her life.... how she deals with it... pls write a sequel... it's an earnest request... not only mine, but others too...
That was a great twist of the husband making sure he saw her fucking Mark so he would never be tempted to want her back. That's a wonderful twist on the usual scenario of a man trying to forgive but is fighting the images in his mind.
I have staid away from commenting on your stories, but this was just to good a storyline. Why would there be a second chapter, it's all done, move on with life. She can find a new big cock and he can find a woman who likes just him. Though it would be tough to want to marry again for either.
Thanks for the entertainment.
does ANYONE here doubt the JPB is going to reconcile these two...???
of course not. JPB will do what so may here do all the time... and bring back wimp hubby
the wife dumps Mark without telling him that she met Dan and what the real reason was. According to the story... at the time Mark was a decent guy who at least deserved to know the truth.
seeing how this worked out for her so well wifey seems to have figured out OR learned that its ok to engage in this sort of behavior-- so she does to again -- for a year in marriage which is suppose to mean something
how is any man suppose to get past that image he now has seen?
what I cannot figure out is why she is upset? This is NOT a one night stand or fling with the old boyfriend with drinking dancing... THAT might be survivable
Maybe.
Even if hubby does not not its been going on for a yearv... he does know or think it has been going on for two months... which is outrageous.
Wifey is severey mental ill.... and thinks the marrage means nothing
she is a no good lying god dam stinking whore.... who really neeeds to be ganged raped
Well I’m sure hubby never wanted to watch for his own pleasure but to answer those standard questions. What, why and is he? And surely, the second envelope contains divorce papers.
It's never just about sex! It's about betrayal, disloyalty, selfishness, erosion of trust, etc., etc. For her to say that she loved Dan with all her heart, and it was only sex with Mark, is as dumb a statement as saying, "I'm sorry I shot you through the heart. I was just using you for target practice and I didn't know it would hurt."
by
Anonymous04/19/06
thanks you own a roll
you're good as anybody,when you're writing like this.keep the good writing up.
by
Anonymous04/19/06
Great Fun Story
You always write good stories - suprises, twists and more. I am for a fan of whimp husbands and cuckolds and that is not your general style. Neither partner should cheat and get a free pass.
The second envelope I am sure you have not forgotten it and it sure is a good teaser for more.
Thank you for your literary efforts.
by
Anonymous04/19/06
Nice Job
I loved the story, just tie up the loose ends please, the second letter and how far and hard she falls? I enjoy your work nice job again.
You know JPB you must be waiting till everyone starts reading your stuff again till you hit us with the hard stuff right?
Regardless this was a good story. And I have to say, for me it was a new and creative way to confront a cheating wife. Don't spoil me by writing stories that I can actually read, I might get used to it. (^_^) Just kidding, but it was good.
the last part of the story was not posted. Why the ommission? Is Lit.com editing out parts of the story, or what?
by
Anonymous04/19/06
Abrupt ending... part 1?
As this sort of story goes, it was... hmm... let's say it was less unrealistic than some I've read. Not totally believeable, but better than average.
But that ending... just, poof, gone? Will there be more?
Keep on writing.
by
Anonymous04/19/06
Bullshit
Lousy ending. I was ready to give you a really high score and then I read the last paragraph. That was a piss-poor way to end the story. I know all about 'it's your story to do with as you please'. The end of this pretty good story was bullshit.
by
Anonymous04/19/06
You're missing part of the story again
This happened on another site. The last paragraphs -- the end of this letter and what's in the 2nd envelope -- are missing.
PLease submit the rest and while you are at it fix the comments!
by
Anonymous04/20/06
I agree...
that this story was short and sweet. I assume that Dan needed to see her with another man (her lover) so he would never feel that she could be his again. I assume that the second package was divorce papers. Thanks for a great story!
Sorry people, but the story is complete. Dan said it as plain as day - he never wants to see her or talk to her ever again. As far as the questions about the second envelope, please re-read the ending - "With trembling fingers" she opened the second envelope and collapsed and let THE DIVORCE PAPERS FALL TO THE FLOOR.
For many of us, this was the last sentence we got:
"I needed to put you behind me and it needed to be done in a way that there would be no coming back from it.
So some of us, I don't know if it was because of browser trouble of what, did not get your last paragraphs. Were I you, I would rag on LE. You wrote a dam fine story and many of us missed tha last of it. And that was a pity!
Regards,
C
by
Anonymous04/20/06
P.S.
I got a call a from some hospital a few later. apparently Dan got into an accident and was killed. ah, well, I thought,, served him right for running our on a person as loving as me,,, but life goes on, I sayz to myself,,, within hours, I was being held lovingly again, in the arms of my more dependable sexual partner,,, life turns out to be beautiful. The End.
by
04/20/06
As a service to readers...
This is the missing text (from another site)!
_______________________________
Confr ontation would only put me in denial, I would accept what you did, forgive you and then go on to lead a shitty life. I needed something that would burn so deep into my soul that I could never bring myself to look at you or speak to you again.
"The entire wife watching fantasy was bogus. I knew that seeing you with Mark would do what I needed it to do. The idea was simplicity itself. Tell you the fantasy and let you do the rest. "My God, it's perfect" you would think, "I can do it with Mark in front of him and have the best of both worlds - my lover and a stable home life." I knew you would do it when you said, "What if it turns out I like it and want to do it again." You were already setting me up so your affair could continue only in front of me instead of behind my back.
"Since you are reading this that means that the deed has been done. The fact that I didn't rush back to your car and grab the envelopes says that I found your coupling with your lover to be just as disgusting as I expected it to be. I took a day off work today and several friends helped me move out of the house. I have cancelled all of our joint credit cards. I've cleaned out and closed our savings account, but I left you what is in the checking account and two of the certificates of deposit. The other five and what would have been your half of the savings will help set me up in an apartment or condo. I think it is only fair that since you drove me away you should pick up part of the tab for my having to relocate.
"I do not want to talk to you or see you again. Don't call, don't write, don't try and catch me at work. I want nothing to do with you ever again."
I dropped the pages from my fingers and I wept. I sobbed and tears ran down my face as what I had done hit me. Dear God, how could I have been so stupid. I let a dalliance with someone I didn't even care about destroy what I had with the man I adored, the man who meant more to me than my own life.
With trembling fingers I picked up the second envelope and opened it. I let out a loud wail and sagged down on the seat and my fingers let the divorce papers fall to the floor.
Please accept my humblest apologizes for what I saod earlier... since the last paragraph was missing I assumed there was going to be a part 2!!!
I can see there is NOT going to be... and after reading the mssing text I have to change my rating to the highest possible.
Clearly after reading your last few stories you are moving or trying to move towards a more reasonable outcome in some of your stories rather than mindless silly fantasy like reconciliation.
Please continue to do so....
Men and woman cheat with different mindsets... with men it is almost always about sex. With women it is Often but not always women have the mindset "well this is just for me"... or "I deserve this"... or as you and others have stated it is sometimes ..."I can have the best of both worlds"...
Maybe its me.... but I can never understand that. In what part of life can ANYONE ALWAYS HAVE THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS or the BEST of everything... and NEVER pay price??
If you work 80 hrs a week you have no marriage...
if you make $1,000,000/ yr and dont report it you will get caught ...
if you go for the hit and run with two outs and your number 4 hitter at the plate and the batter misses the ball the BIG inning is over...
if you cheat it will come out... and the devestation will be Kartina like and awful.
Bob - Mystery solved. The last 4 paragraphs were simply dropped by Lit. I really enjoyed the story, particularly the twist at the end. I do join those who would like to see another chapter - - where do they go from here (and, yes, I'd be interested to see if a reconcilliation could really happen). All in all, one of your best. Great story.
As I usually like to read comments before I comment myself I was saved from saying you need to finish this. I sure don't know what happened to the end of the story, but as some provided it in the comments section I have read it all.
There are those who would beg for reconciliation. There were some who said "as much as she loves him" but in the remaining years of my life I will never "NEVER" see how anyone can say this woman really loved him. If she did she never would have done this to him. She loved herself. It started when she mistreated Mark in the first place. It was all about her.
Dan was right to walk away. It is what I would have done.
He only knew about two months of the affair. What if he later found out about the whole year? Reconciliation or not he would have been destroyed all over again. So no reconciliation was the right move.
Thanks for your efforts Bob.
Charleybear
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Anonymous04/21/06
Needs no more
Good story, good ending. She shit on two men during her life involved with them and she got what she deserved.
One of the best efforts that JPB has written. For a short story, the characters were well developed. The dialogue flowed easily and naturally. And, of course, at the end we were rewarded with a real twist on what was expected.
One commentator noted that her failing was that it was "all about her". I don't disagree with this but it seems to me that her greater failing was that she lacked moral courage.
She divested herself of Mark by coming up with a pretex to end their engagement. She did not have the courage to sit down with Mark and explain to him that she had found someone else who had captured her heart. This was her first failing.
Secondly, upon meeting Mark for the first time in 6 years, she ends up in bed with his 9 inch cock for the next two nights. She simply did not have the integrity to walk away from a situation that required morality and marital fidelity over the satisfaction of a filling copulation.
There are other examples to be gleaned from this short story. That there are so many ways she failed her marriage is a testament to how well the story was written.
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Anonymous04/25/06
A very good story but needs chapter 2.
This story is excellent as far as it goes but I hope you will consider adding a second chapter.
by
Anonymous05/12/06
Good Story
I really liked this story and how it ended. Mark and Dan are better off without the B-er witch. Cool!
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Anonymous08/11/06
Lost me
You lost me the first time you got Dan and Mark mixed up, so I quit reading. A story's main character ought to remember which man is her husbank.
English
One of Your Best
I hope that you will finish up the hanging lives. I have enjoyed this story more than any other of yours.
Great story Bob!
I guess someone forgot to tell her about the price of admission to play the game!
The ending was set up nicely.
Regards, DJ
You sure do make reading your stories interesting
Bob:
I never know what your latest twist will be. This was a good one. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Always good
i always love your stuff, but i have to ask - what was in the second envelope on her car seat???
Liked the story well enough
and it is likely reasonable to assume the other envelope contained divorce papers.
I didn't even think to ask.
Where did it go?
Pretty good story, but what happened? I finished with that feeling I get everytime my wife watces one of those Life Time Originals. "What the hell just happened?"
Is this story complete?
Feels like the last couple of paragraphs are missing. Good story though. I like the idea that he had to see her screwing the other guy to make sure he would never take her back again.
He was right. Where there is no trust there is no marriage. He still loves her. He just could never trust her again.
WHAT IS MISSING FROM THE END OF THE STORY
from SOL, here is how the story ends. Apparantly the last few paragraphs were truncated on Literotica:
_____________________________________ ___________________
Confrontation would only put me in denial, I would accept what you did, forgive you and then go on to lead a shitty life. I needed something that would burn so deep into my soul that I could never bring myself to look at you or speak to you again.
"The entire wife watching fantasy was bogus. I knew that seeing you with Mark would do what I needed it to do. The idea was simplicity itself. Tell you the fantasy and let you do the rest. "My God, it's perfect" you would think, "I can do it with Mark in front of him and have the best of both worlds - my lover and a stable home life." I knew you would do it when you said, "What if it turns out I like it and want to do it again." You were already setting me up so your affair could continue only in front of me instead of behind my back.
"Since you are reading this that means that the deed has been done. The fact that I didn't rush back to your car and grab the envelopes says that I found your coupling with your lover to be just as disgusting as I expected it to be. I took a day off work today and several friends helped me move out of the house. I have cancelled all of our joint credit cards. I've cleaned out and closed our savings account, but I left you what is in the checking account and two of the certificates of deposit. The other five and what would have been your half of the savings will help set me up in an apartment or condo. I think it is only fair that since you drove me away you should pick up part of the tab for my having to relocate.
"I do not want to talk to you or see you again. Don't call, don't write, don't try and catch me at work. I want nothing to do with you ever again."
I dropped the pages from my fingers and I wept. I sobbed and tears ran down my face as what I had done hit me. Dear God, how could I have been so stupid. I let a dalliance with someone I didn't even care about destroy what I had with the man I adored, the man who meant more to me than my own life.
With trembling fingers I picked up the second envelope and opened it. I let out a loud wail and sagged down on the seat and my fingers let the divorce papers fall to the floor.
________________________________________ ____________
nice twist
Good story line, and a nice little twist at the end!
hmm....
i would not say anything about ur characters or story anymore... it's pretty obvious that ur female characters have no human feelings at all... whether they love someone or not.... all of ur stories show that... however, it doesn't matter... i am a bit interested in the ending part.... she tells that she would just die without dan.... well, literally, would she really be devastated that much or she would find another 'love at first sight'? I am looking forward to the depth of her love for Dan.. what she does in future.... a sequel would be good.. no, don't fear, no suggestions... we know, she will be a low-moral slut again... but, anyways, the first paragraph of the story where she stated her love for dan so strongly that her life could waste away - that was surprising... a sequel would be good...
but, u r JPB, anything, biggest shit or moderate good words, can come!!!
what can i say.... sorry, Dan.....
same old - sluts & good guys -love & sex apart
where is the ending?
Sheesh!
Where is the rest? Terrible, to get me so built up and not end it. This has to be a flaw of some sort. I will wait for the finish... but I don't think the effect will be as it should have been. Sorry. Life threw you a lemon. :(
Well, hell
The way you have written this tale I am unable to agree with either. Of courde Dan doesn't realize exactly how she feels but maybe he really should have found out before he tucked his tail and ran.
Kathy is absolutely wrong. I don't see anything in her defense. But since we know how she feels about Dan we really want them back together. Would she remain faithful this time? Quite possibly. But they would need a lot of counseling. It could easily be said that her former familiarity with Mark allowed her to be unfaithful. We know of noone else in her life.
So write the sequel Bob. Would love to see how you would approach it.
Excellent
Well done, well written. I presume there will be additional chapters.
Excellent
Well done, well written. I presume there will be additional chapters.
JPB, do read this..
i have just read the ending thebullet provided... may be it was urs.... but, we all want to know what happens to her life.... how she deals with it... pls write a sequel... it's an earnest request... not only mine, but others too...
Please finish!
Quite liked this. OK everyone is a loser in this story, but I suppose that is the name of the game when cheating is involved.
However it would be nice to know what was in the second envelope, but I suppose we can guess.
Really good twist on seeing wife with lover
That was a great twist of the husband making sure he saw her fucking Mark so he would never be tempted to want her back. That's a wonderful twist on the usual scenario of a man trying to forgive but is fighting the images in his mind.
I have staid away from commenting on your stories, but this was just to good a storyline. Why would there be a second chapter, it's all done, move on with life. She can find a new big cock and he can find a woman who likes just him. Though it would be tough to want to marry again for either.
Thanks for the entertainment.
All aboard the reconcilation wimp hubby EXPRESS
wimp hubby express now a arriving track 69....
does ANYONE here doubt the JPB is going to reconcile these two...???
of course not. JPB will do what so may here do all the time... and bring back wimp hubby
the wife dumps Mark without telling him that she met Dan and what the real reason was. According to the story... at the time Mark was a decent guy who at least deserved to know the truth.
seeing how this worked out for her so well wifey seems to have figured out OR learned that its ok to engage in this sort of behavior-- so she does to again -- for a year in marriage which is suppose to mean something
how is any man suppose to get past that image he now has seen?
what I cannot figure out is why she is upset? This is NOT a one night stand or fling with the old boyfriend with drinking dancing... THAT might be survivable
Maybe.
Even if hubby does not not its been going on for a yearv... he does know or think it has been going on for two months... which is outrageous.
Wifey is severey mental ill.... and thinks the marrage means nothing
she is a no good lying god dam stinking whore.... who really neeeds to be ganged raped
wow
a great story liked it
Good writing as usual
Well I’m sure hubby never wanted to watch for his own pleasure but to answer those standard questions. What, why and is he? And surely, the second envelope contains divorce papers.
My best regards
I always enjoy JPB's stories
This one has a kind of perfection to it.. I especially liked the way it brings in the fact that she was really shitty to Mark the first time.
The Second Envelope
What was in it?
For once ....
...you got the ending right.
It's never just about sex! It's about betrayal, disloyalty, selfishness, erosion of trust, etc., etc. For her to say that she loved Dan with all her heart, and it was only sex with Mark, is as dumb a statement as saying, "I'm sorry I shot you through the heart. I was just using you for target practice and I didn't know it would hurt."
thanks you own a roll
you're good as anybody,when you're writing like this.keep the good writing up.
Great Fun Story
You always write good stories - suprises, twists and more. I am for a fan of whimp husbands and cuckolds and that is not your general style. Neither partner should cheat and get a free pass.
The second envelope I am sure you have not forgotten it and it sure is a good teaser for more.
Thank you for your literary efforts.
Nice Job
I loved the story, just tie up the loose ends please, the second letter and how far and hard she falls? I enjoy your work nice job again.
*Sigh*
You know JPB you must be waiting till everyone starts reading your stuff again till you hit us with the hard stuff right?
Regardless this was a good story. And I have to say, for me it was a new and creative way to confront a cheating wife. Don't spoil me by writing stories that I can actually read, I might get used to it. (^_^) Just kidding, but it was good.
Very Good, BUT...
the last part of the story was not posted. Why the ommission? Is Lit.com editing out parts of the story, or what?
Abrupt ending... part 1?
As this sort of story goes, it was... hmm... let's say it was less unrealistic than some I've read. Not totally believeable, but better than average.
But that ending... just, poof, gone? Will there be more?
Keep on writing.
Bullshit
Lousy ending. I was ready to give you a really high score and then I read the last paragraph. That was a piss-poor way to end the story. I know all about 'it's your story to do with as you please'. The end of this pretty good story was bullshit.
You're missing part of the story again
This happened on another site. The last paragraphs -- the end of this letter and what's in the 2nd envelope -- are missing.
Good story and a strong loviong husband. Glad he
dumped the whore. But what about the second envelope? Is there a part 2?
Where is the rest of the story!
good so far but this is only a part of the story!
PLease submit the rest and while you are at it fix the comments!
I agree...
that this story was short and sweet. I assume that Dan needed to see her with another man (her lover) so he would never feel that she could be his again. I assume that the second package was divorce papers. Thanks for a great story!
SleeplessinMD
JPB's Comment
Sorry people, but the story is complete. Dan said it as plain as day - he never wants to see her or talk to her ever again. As far as the questions about the second envelope, please re-read the ending - "With trembling fingers" she opened the second envelope and collapsed and let THE DIVORCE PAPERS FALL TO THE FLOOR.
Thanks for all the good comments
JPB
In defense of some commeter, Bob
For many of us, this was the last sentence we got:
"I needed to put you behind me and it needed to be done in a way that there would be no coming back from it.
So some of us, I don't know if it was because of browser trouble of what, did not get your last paragraphs. Were I you, I would rag on LE. You wrote a dam fine story and many of us missed tha last of it. And that was a pity!
Regards,
C
P.S.
I got a call a from some hospital a few later. apparently Dan got into an accident and was killed. ah, well, I thought,, served him right for running our on a person as loving as me,,, but life goes on, I sayz to myself,,, within hours, I was being held lovingly again, in the arms of my more dependable sexual partner,,, life turns out to be beautiful. The End.
As a service to readers...
This is the missing text (from another site)!
_______________________________
Confr ontation would only put me in denial, I would accept what you did, forgive you and then go on to lead a shitty life. I needed something that would burn so deep into my soul that I could never bring myself to look at you or speak to you again.
"The entire wife watching fantasy was bogus. I knew that seeing you with Mark would do what I needed it to do. The idea was simplicity itself. Tell you the fantasy and let you do the rest. "My God, it's perfect" you would think, "I can do it with Mark in front of him and have the best of both worlds - my lover and a stable home life." I knew you would do it when you said, "What if it turns out I like it and want to do it again." You were already setting me up so your affair could continue only in front of me instead of behind my back.
"Since you are reading this that means that the deed has been done. The fact that I didn't rush back to your car and grab the envelopes says that I found your coupling with your lover to be just as disgusting as I expected it to be. I took a day off work today and several friends helped me move out of the house. I have cancelled all of our joint credit cards. I've cleaned out and closed our savings account, but I left you what is in the checking account and two of the certificates of deposit. The other five and what would have been your half of the savings will help set me up in an apartment or condo. I think it is only fair that since you drove me away you should pick up part of the tab for my having to relocate.
"I do not want to talk to you or see you again. Don't call, don't write, don't try and catch me at work. I want nothing to do with you ever again."
I dropped the pages from my fingers and I wept. I sobbed and tears ran down my face as what I had done hit me. Dear God, how could I have been so stupid. I let a dalliance with someone I didn't even care about destroy what I had with the man I adored, the man who meant more to me than my own life.
With trembling fingers I picked up the second envelope and opened it. I let out a loud wail and sagged down on the seat and my fingers let the divorce papers fall to the floor.
still missing
not only can't I see the rest of the story, but I cannot link to the rest of the comments. Oh well...
Liked It
Thanks for a good read.
Bob
since last protion was missing MY APOLOGIES -JPB
JPB
Please accept my humblest apologizes for what I saod earlier... since the last paragraph was missing I assumed there was going to be a part 2!!!
I can see there is NOT going to be... and after reading the mssing text I have to change my rating to the highest possible.
Clearly after reading your last few stories you are moving or trying to move towards a more reasonable outcome in some of your stories rather than mindless silly fantasy like reconciliation.
Please continue to do so....
Men and woman cheat with different mindsets... with men it is almost always about sex. With women it is Often but not always women have the mindset "well this is just for me"... or "I deserve this"... or as you and others have stated it is sometimes ..."I can have the best of both worlds"...
Maybe its me.... but I can never understand that. In what part of life can ANYONE ALWAYS HAVE THE BEST OF BOTH WORLDS or the BEST of everything... and NEVER pay price??
If you work 80 hrs a week you have no marriage...
if you make $1,000,000/ yr and dont report it you will get caught ...
if you go for the hit and run with two outs and your number 4 hitter at the plate and the batter misses the ball the BIG inning is over...
if you cheat it will come out... and the devestation will be Kartina like and awful.
The End - Finally
Bob - Mystery solved. The last 4 paragraphs were simply dropped by Lit. I really enjoyed the story, particularly the twist at the end. I do join those who would like to see another chapter - - where do they go from here (and, yes, I'd be interested to see if a reconcilliation could really happen). All in all, one of your best. Great story.
Good Story Bob
As I usually like to read comments before I comment myself I was saved from saying you need to finish this. I sure don't know what happened to the end of the story, but as some provided it in the comments section I have read it all.
There are those who would beg for reconciliation. There were some who said "as much as she loves him" but in the remaining years of my life I will never "NEVER" see how anyone can say this woman really loved him. If she did she never would have done this to him. She loved herself. It started when she mistreated Mark in the first place. It was all about her.
Dan was right to walk away. It is what I would have done.
He only knew about two months of the affair. What if he later found out about the whole year? Reconciliation or not he would have been destroyed all over again. So no reconciliation was the right move.
Thanks for your efforts Bob.
Charleybear
Needs no more
Good story, good ending. She shit on two men during her life involved with them and she got what she deserved.
Good
Another good one thanks
Easy To Rate
One of the best efforts that JPB has written. For a short story, the characters were well developed. The dialogue flowed easily and naturally. And, of course, at the end we were rewarded with a real twist on what was expected.
One commentator noted that her failing was that it was "all about her". I don't disagree with this but it seems to me that her greater failing was that she lacked moral courage.
She divested herself of Mark by coming up with a pretex to end their engagement. She did not have the courage to sit down with Mark and explain to him that she had found someone else who had captured her heart. This was her first failing.
Secondly, upon meeting Mark for the first time in 6 years, she ends up in bed with his 9 inch cock for the next two nights. She simply did not have the integrity to walk away from a situation that required morality and marital fidelity over the satisfaction of a filling copulation.
There are other examples to be gleaned from this short story. That there are so many ways she failed her marriage is a testament to how well the story was written.
A very good story but needs chapter 2.
This story is excellent as far as it goes but I hope you will consider adding a second chapter.
Good Story
I really liked this story and how it ended. Mark and Dan are better off without the B-er witch. Cool!
Lost me
You lost me the first time you got Dan and Mark mixed up, so I quit reading. A story's main character ought to remember which man is her husbank.
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