All Comments on 'LaKeysha'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Lovely...

..very touching story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
surely

The male in this combo must be an ugly motherfucker that he can't get a white woman to fuck him. Sterotypically a black gal is a big ugly motherfucker that goes about 300 lbs, has tits that hang to het knees, hair under her arms that is long enough to braid, and a cunt thatsmells like the cargo hold of an unwashed tuna schooner.

Black men won't fuck them. That is the reason they always fuck white housewives.

For every Haille Berry type you see, there are 100,000 of the ones described above.

OVERLANDOVERLANDalmost 18 years ago
NAMES?

I wasn't going to comment on this umtil I read the remarks by that ugly white racist pig.

The story was very nice if a little naive and lacked some extra detail.

LaKeysha? I know coloured people love exotic names, probably from their history. It would have been nice if you had given its meaning and included it in the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good On You

I loved the angle of your story and wish your characters all the very best for their future together. Race should be no more a barrier to being together than culture or religion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Beautiful!

It was good story....but , I think you could stretched is some more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Agree with Names

My initiial rating was a 4. Its good but should have been developed a bit more and was not particularly arousing. However, after reading the racist comments, I am pleased to give this a 5.

LutherTLutherTalmost 18 years ago
Nice

Really romantic story...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Cute

It was a very cute story. Thank you for writing it. I love the way the two interacted before getting together.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
What a sweet story..

That story was so sweet and ended quite nicely without being sappy..great job:)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
wow

well, i just read your story, and it seemed like it was written about me and my fiancee...especially the part when she asked him to marry him ( but reverse it )...anyway, im in love with this story...now i know why he sent it to me...it reminded him about us

anyway, keep on writing

S.M -Nubian Princess

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Better

I wished the story was developed more, but it was good. Again forget the rascist comments. You would think they wouldn't read interracial literature if they have such a problem with it? DUH

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
i like the overall feel of the story... liked it

i like the overall feel of the story... could have explored some areas...but happily would give this story 4 out of 5 :)

Goddiva11Goddiva11over 15 years ago
Shouts out for men loves various shades of brown

I dug this story and wished the writer would have elaborated more on the couples sexual encounter. It had just enough cutesy romance without mushy tackiness. Now for the ignorant fuck posting that black women are undesirable and that's why black men are fucking white house wives. I suggest he takes a closer look: the white men dating black women tend to chose those that make all men envious whereas the black man doesn't care where he dragged her from having a white woman by any means is their motto.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
extend

I really like the story, just wish it was a bit longer. I have become a fan of black women myself.

Fubar2kFubar2kabout 14 years ago
Good story - bad ending!

Reads as though once you passed beyond the sex bit, you got bored and couldn't wait to wrap it up. Pity. Could have gone a long way.

StevieLynn23StevieLynn23over 13 years ago
wow

This brought tears to my eyes. My bf is white and though our families are very excepting the world sometimes is not. I hope u guys have a happy and full marriage and may god bless u and your 3 beautiful queens

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
Ended So soon :<(

This seemed to have ended too soon. A suggestion to re-write it as a series and build the characters and their relationship more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice story :)

My fav part is when LaKeysha said lets piss off racists and make mulatto children lol I mite just use tht one day xD

technogleattechnogleatalmost 10 years ago
Awesome

😄😍😍😍😳

IronDragonIronDragonalmost 10 years ago
Great short tale.

Maybe a bit too short, but I still enjoyed it quite a bit. My wife had our baby daughter in January, so I can definitely relate to the "pissing off the racists" line. :D

In spite of the brevity, I'm still giving it 5 HUGE Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
*****

Seemed truncated, but I still liked it a lot. But I have a couple of comments about the previous comments. The racist one is deplorable, and I'd like to kick the ass of that commenter. Goddiva11, I've noticed the same thing. Where I live it seems every time I see a white guy with a black woman, the woman is a knockout. And every time I see a black guy with a white woman, the woman is, well, I'll be kind and say she's not a knockout.

IronDragon, congratulations to you and your wife.

Five.

SirBigfootSirBigfootalmost 8 years ago
Loved it

I only wish it was longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
And then?

The sweetness of the situation demands a bit more. Something just sat sweet but even more revealing. Please?

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
That was Fast

Good story but I would have liked more descriptive details of everyone so I can picture them in my mind better.

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