The male in this combo must be an ugly motherfucker that he can't get a white woman to fuck him. Sterotypically a black gal is a big ugly motherfucker that goes about 300 lbs, has tits that hang to het knees, hair under her arms that is long enough to braid, and a cunt thatsmells like the cargo hold of an unwashed tuna schooner.
Black men won't fuck them. That is the reason they always fuck white housewives.
For every Haille Berry type you see, there are 100,000 of the ones described above.
I wasn't going to comment on this umtil I read the remarks by that ugly white racist pig.
The story was very nice if a little naive and lacked some extra detail.
LaKeysha? I know coloured people love exotic names, probably from their history. It would have been nice if you had given its meaning and included it in the story.
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Anonymous04/20/06
Good On You
I loved the angle of your story and wish your characters all the very best for their future together. Race should be no more a barrier to being together than culture or religion.
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Anonymous04/20/06
Beautiful!
It was good story....but , I think you could stretched is some more.
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Anonymous04/20/06
Agree with Names
My initiial rating was a 4. Its good but should have been developed a bit more and was not particularly arousing. However, after reading the racist comments, I am pleased to give this a 5.
It was a very cute story. Thank you for writing it. I love the way the two interacted before getting together.
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Anonymous04/20/06
What a sweet story..
That story was so sweet and ended quite nicely without being sappy..great job:)
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Anonymous05/30/06
wow
well, i just read your story, and it seemed like it was written about me and my fiancee...especially the part when she asked him to marry him ( but reverse it )...anyway, im in love with this story...now i know why he sent it to me...it reminded him about us
anyway, keep on writing
S.M -Nubian Princess
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Anonymous11/18/06
Better
I wished the story was developed more, but it was good. Again forget the rascist comments. You would think they wouldn't read interracial literature if they have such a problem with it? DUH
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Anonymous10/04/07
i like the overall feel of the story... liked it
i like the overall feel of the story... could have explored some areas...but happily would give this story 4 out of 5 :)
I dug this story and wished the writer would have elaborated more on the couples sexual encounter. It had just enough cutesy romance without mushy tackiness. Now for the ignorant fuck posting that black women are undesirable and that's why black men are fucking white house wives. I suggest he takes a closer look: the white men dating black women tend to chose those that make all men envious whereas the black man doesn't care where he dragged her from having a white woman by any means is their motto.
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Anonymous03/15/09
extend
I really like the story, just wish it was a bit longer. I have become a fan of black women myself.
This brought tears to my eyes. My bf is white and though our families are very excepting the world sometimes is not. I hope u guys have a happy and full marriage and may god bless u and your 3 beautiful queens
Maybe a bit too short, but I still enjoyed it quite a bit. My wife had our baby daughter in January, so I can definitely relate to the "pissing off the racists" line. :D
In spite of the brevity, I'm still giving it 5 HUGE Stars!
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Anonymous05/27/14
*****
Seemed truncated, but I still liked it a lot. But I have a couple of comments about the previous comments. The racist one is deplorable, and I'd like to kick the ass of that commenter. Goddiva11, I've noticed the same thing. Where I live it seems every time I see a white guy with a black woman, the woman is a knockout. And every time I see a black guy with a white woman, the woman is, well, I'll be kind and say she's not a knockout.
English
Lovely...
..very touching story
surely
The male in this combo must be an ugly motherfucker that he can't get a white woman to fuck him. Sterotypically a black gal is a big ugly motherfucker that goes about 300 lbs, has tits that hang to het knees, hair under her arms that is long enough to braid, and a cunt thatsmells like the cargo hold of an unwashed tuna schooner.
Black men won't fuck them. That is the reason they always fuck white housewives.
For every Haille Berry type you see, there are 100,000 of the ones described above.
NAMES?
I wasn't going to comment on this umtil I read the remarks by that ugly white racist pig.
The story was very nice if a little naive and lacked some extra detail.
LaKeysha? I know coloured people love exotic names, probably from their history. It would have been nice if you had given its meaning and included it in the story.
Good On You
I loved the angle of your story and wish your characters all the very best for their future together. Race should be no more a barrier to being together than culture or religion.
Beautiful!
It was good story....but , I think you could stretched is some more.
Agree with Names
My initiial rating was a 4. Its good but should have been developed a bit more and was not particularly arousing. However, after reading the racist comments, I am pleased to give this a 5.
Nice
Really romantic story...
Cute
It was a very cute story. Thank you for writing it. I love the way the two interacted before getting together.
What a sweet story..
That story was so sweet and ended quite nicely without being sappy..great job:)
wow
well, i just read your story, and it seemed like it was written about me and my fiancee...especially the part when she asked him to marry him ( but reverse it )...anyway, im in love with this story...now i know why he sent it to me...it reminded him about us
anyway, keep on writing
S.M -Nubian Princess
Better
I wished the story was developed more, but it was good. Again forget the rascist comments. You would think they wouldn't read interracial literature if they have such a problem with it? DUH
i like the overall feel of the story... liked it
i like the overall feel of the story... could have explored some areas...but happily would give this story 4 out of 5 :)
Shouts out for men loves various shades of brown
I dug this story and wished the writer would have elaborated more on the couples sexual encounter. It had just enough cutesy romance without mushy tackiness. Now for the ignorant fuck posting that black women are undesirable and that's why black men are fucking white house wives. I suggest he takes a closer look: the white men dating black women tend to chose those that make all men envious whereas the black man doesn't care where he dragged her from having a white woman by any means is their motto.
extend
I really like the story, just wish it was a bit longer. I have become a fan of black women myself.
Good story - bad ending!
Reads as though once you passed beyond the sex bit, you got bored and couldn't wait to wrap it up. Pity. Could have gone a long way.
wow
This brought tears to my eyes. My bf is white and though our families are very excepting the world sometimes is not. I hope u guys have a happy and full marriage and may god bless u and your 3 beautiful queens
Ended So soon :
This seemed to have ended too soon. A suggestion to re-write it as a series and build the characters and their relationship more...
Nice story :)
My fav part is when LaKeysha said lets piss off racists and make mulatto children lol I mite just use tht one day xD
Awesome
😄😍😍😍😳
Great short tale.
Maybe a bit too short, but I still enjoyed it quite a bit. My wife had our baby daughter in January, so I can definitely relate to the "pissing off the racists" line. :D
In spite of the brevity, I'm still giving it 5 HUGE Stars!
*****
Seemed truncated, but I still liked it a lot. But I have a couple of comments about the previous comments. The racist one is deplorable, and I'd like to kick the ass of that commenter. Goddiva11, I've noticed the same thing. Where I live it seems every time I see a white guy with a black woman, the woman is a knockout. And every time I see a black guy with a white woman, the woman is, well, I'll be kind and say she's not a knockout.
IronDragon, congratulations to you and your wife.
Five.
Loved it
I only wish it was longer
And then?
The sweetness of the situation demands a bit more. Something just sat sweet but even more revealing. Please?
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