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Good one Colleen
Well written with an interesting contrast of characters.
The fact that it was a learning experience for both characters made for an interesting read.
Well done!
kudos again Colleen
once again you've brought a vivid realism to your story that leaves me hard and wanton. Truly you are one of the best erotic writers I have read. Keep that wonderful sexy mind of yours active and I look forward to your next story. You are my inspiration to write better stories myself. Thanks Colly!!
Always...
Always a pleasure, Colleen.
You're just full of surprises, aren't you?
;-)
If this isn't stuff you're already familiar
with, then your research is amazing.
Thanks,
Jane
Yes!
Loved it!!
Colleen, you are a sick and
depraved woman, I couldn't love you more. That story rocked.
A real winner of a naughty tale!
Plenty of humor, sex, and satire. Hmmm...not to mention a look at some fascinating, but all-too-believable characters. Just glad that you didn't make them saints. A few flaws add depth indeed.
whew!
You are a fabulous writer!!! It's nice to know I'm not the only one who had trouble with the strap on thing, it does take a lot of work, but definitely worth it. I'm glad you have kept on writing.
Refreshing
Very Refreshing!
I've been reading/writing for years, and have become pretty jaded, so reading something about Friends helping friends was pretty cool!
Can't win'em all...
I must say how much I miss your writing. You were truly one of the most gifted erotic writer I've had the pleasure of reading. Others have come close but, no one consistently produced so many realistically believable and incredible hot stories.
This however, was not your best work. Rape is nothing like fiction; you can't begin to imagine. I can't fathom any sane woman being OK with -or getting off on- being drugged and then forcibly raped and sodomized by a "friend." Or later forgiving that person's actions and betrayal, such that they pursue further sex with them.
So, you bat .999 out of 1.000, cuz you struck out looking here.
the difference here is...
a rapist doesnt ask if you are okay, they drug you up to keep you out, they do not welcome victim coming out of drug induced relaxation, this was unorthadox but it was handled with sensitivity that kept out the violence of rape and the sensitivity of the writer was recognizable...good job, honestly creative maybe if i had a friend like Bren i'd have learned sooner too, instead of carrying around my hangups for so long. lol, seriously!
Great Story!
Well-rounded, complete story. Loved it.
Contrived
And it left me feeling pretty glum.
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