All Comments on 'Nava Ch. 01'

what i expected at all...but sweet and well written never the less...Thank you for sharing it with us. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I really enjoyed the introduction to your story and hope you keep posting installments to it. I don't often read the chapter stories as they don't hold my interest; but, I think yours will.

Thank you.

i truly liked this story despite its biblical attachment! i think it's going to turn out simply great and i look forward to reading more! Just make sure that there is more and sometime soon. Waiting eons for chapter installments makes fans crazy!

I really love this, I just wish you would continue to post chapters for it...

You've developed a great introduction and you have a compelling writing style. I would love to know what is in store for this couple. Good job!

nice story,,,great beginning...is there more?