by SunrockSin
this poem, like your others, drags me along and demands i read to the end. well done. i like how you can turn a single moment at a busy airport into one that will resonate in reality for many readers. i also like the placement of words on the page, very much like the jumbled chaos in the airport.
wildsweetone
outstanding write. You've captured a moment snatched away from time and written it so elegantly.