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Nice
I liked it and hope to see another chapter coming. Will the royal family find a way to break free of her spell? Don't leave us hanging! lol
Devilicious
Hot! Yummy!
Give us mroe!
Good Story
Good story man. It might have been better if you gave us more of a story build up like you do in most of your stories, but all and all it was an awesome story.
More sex, less garbage
Your stories that deal with raw sex are much better. Tryto revert to the sex type stories, more interesting and more exciting.
nice!!
I love this kind of stories!(dark queen... transforming people..)
hope you'll write more like that one!
thanks!
hmmmmmmm....
Nice...
I like your stories..
They're evil!!
Mwuahahahah!
I love Morticia!
It's rare to find stories where the "evil" woman or in this case. The evil sorceress queen, Morticia wins in the end! I love her! hehe
Very nice
I actually really enjoyed that, having been an avid reader for quite some time i have found that this is the type of story that i like, good job with the narrative i thought it was well written. Keep up the good work.
Great!
Loved this story! More please.
Great fucking story
I love the elements of self-parody in this, with the archetypal characters and setting. Plus the legitimately arousing descriptions were awesome, very fun read, wish you would come back to writing!
Awesome
That's a good story. Descriptions realistic, not a lot of repetition, good and funny (but still erotic) story. A very nice read.
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