All Comments on 'Movie Night'

Not a bad story but you really should take the time to edit your work. You jump from tense to tense, there are spelling errors and grammar errors.

Marla Dietrich - if you're referring to the actress, it's actually Marlene Dietrich.

Next time show someone else your work first and get them to proofread it. Sometimes it's hard to see your own spelling and grammar errors which is why there are editors.

Just a suggestion.