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Watching Heidi

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/04/06

so damn erotic

I knew at the back of this was the menace of mind controlling chemicals in the air, yet it all seemed so acceptable. To read about a woman who shakes off her inhibitions is a modern fable about woman's freedom. Well done. Sexy and stimulating.

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by Anonymous06/08/07

Nibbles and Tits

Something to sink your teeth into, but not to hard. plus give your tongue a sleigh ride.

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by bigrimmstales04/17/08

astonishingly erotic

It's the second time I have read this and I marvel at its eroticism. It is not crude despite being graphic. The sex oozes out of the pages. Well done. I envy your writing style. Peter Grimm

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by Anonymous12/12/08

help!

hey, i love the story but it seems like sections of it are missing? is there a mistake on the website or is this how its supposed to be?

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