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A Christmas Gift to Remember Ch. 01

byPM Stud23©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/26/06

Not bad!

Good start.

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by Anonymous04/26/06

How about this for a teaser

Jerk gets gift from kindly sister.
He rewards her by calling her a slut

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by Anonymous04/26/06

Her Tits Grew!

Wow, her tits grew from 34c to 36c in three paragraphs. Christmas dinner must have been extra good that year.

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by Anonymous04/29/06

So Far So Good

A fairly decent story. Where is Chapter 02.

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by Anonymous11/26/06

I want more!

I want to hear how you're going to make her cum!!!!

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by Anonymous09/02/07

none

that was great but the second chapter im sure will be well worth the wait keep up the good work

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by hedonist6608/03/08

Careful

A good start, and a very hot story, and well told; but, you should pay attention to details, so you won't accidentally change them. Also, there was no description of how Aaron felt, either physically, or emotionally, as he came.

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by Anonymous03/06/13

no good

as usual this was way to rushed and unrealisticly stupid.

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by Anonymous12/19/13

finish it

It says to be continued sooooooo continue it

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