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Not bad!
Good start.
How about this for a teaser
Jerk gets gift from kindly sister.
He rewards her by calling her a slut
Her Tits Grew!
Wow, her tits grew from 34c to 36c in three paragraphs. Christmas dinner must have been extra good that year.
So Far So Good
A fairly decent story. Where is Chapter 02.
I want more!
I want to hear how you're going to make her cum!!!!
none
that was great but the second chapter im sure will be well worth the wait keep up the good work
Careful
A good start, and a very hot story, and well told; but, you should pay attention to details, so you won't accidentally change them. Also, there was no description of how Aaron felt, either physically, or emotionally, as he came.
no good
as usual this was way to rushed and unrealisticly stupid.
finish it
It says to be continued sooooooo continue it
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