All Comments on 'The Induction of Anna'

All the parts are there, it just needs a bit more to flesh out the club members and the heroine/protagonist/victim's emotional transformation from "innocent" to active member.

This is unusual but ...

I think the past participle is "induced" rather than "inducted".

It was a great idea, great story line... my only suggestion is details... they can make or break a story... add in a few more!! :)

Loved it however, it was a great beginning, please, keep writing!

i liked it very much, but it was a bit too shoort for my taste. unless there is a follow up ofcourse...

"The Induction of Anna" is the best story of yours I've read so far!

I would give you 20-Stars if I could!!

Thanks,

Gay Kat.

hope its a large city or anna is in deep trouble