All the parts are there, it just needs a bit more to flesh out the club members and the heroine/protagonist/victim's emotional transformation from "innocent" to active member.
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Anonymous04/26/06
Weird Style
This is unusual but ...
I think the past participle is "induced" rather than "inducted".
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Anonymous01/21/08
Great idea...
It was a great idea, great story line... my only suggestion is details... they can make or break a story... add in a few more!! :)
Loved it however, it was a great beginning, please, keep writing!
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Anonymous06/14/11
good, but short
i liked it very much, but it was a bit too shoort for my taste. unless there is a follow up ofcourse...
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Anonymous07/07/16
Well, well, well, Mr. Lustful Desires, 5-Stars!
"The Induction of Anna" is the best story of yours I've read so far!
English
Good Start
All the parts are there, it just needs a bit more to flesh out the club members and the heroine/protagonist/victim's emotional transformation from "innocent" to active member.
Weird Style
This is unusual but ...
I think the past participle is "induced" rather than "inducted".
Great idea...
It was a great idea, great story line... my only suggestion is details... they can make or break a story... add in a few more!! :)
Loved it however, it was a great beginning, please, keep writing!
good, but short
i liked it very much, but it was a bit too shoort for my taste. unless there is a follow up ofcourse...
Well, well, well, Mr. Lustful Desires, 5-Stars!
"The Induction of Anna" is the best story of yours I've read so far!
I would give you 20-Stars if I could!!
Thanks,
Gay Kat.
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