All Comments on 'Locke Ness Monster?'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Young woman and an older man.

One of my favorite combo's. What a neat story with some nicely done hot scenes that gave me hard-on after hard-on. He may have been an old coot but he sure knew how to please a young lady. Please keep writing these great stories.

1Cosmolance1Cosmolancealmost 17 years ago
Taming the monster! :)

Another nice story from you, Amy. Thanks! This one is sweet and tender as well as being sexy and having a satisfying completeness.

One suggestion is that you try to get the use of "lay" and "lie" right. For instance you wrote "I told him to lay right back, so I could get to him better." That should be "I told him to lie right back ...." I mention it because I have noticed the error in several of your stories. I know that it is a fairly common error made by other writers and speakers but your getting it right would make your work more sophistocated.

I like most of your stories a lot. Please keep writing for us!

DenisKDenisKover 16 years ago
As an Old Coot myself...

I can relate to the Monster but not, unfortunately, as regards to size.

Well drawn characters and the sex was a naturally progressing part of nicely written story. I think you have drawn heavily on your own life experiences here (and in your other stories too) and it shows in your sympathy for your characters.

Always glad to read your offerings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

A lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed it

MineriiMineriialmost 10 years ago
Very good story !

Your mind must go 100 miles an hour but so far I like this one the best. Maybe because I am an older man and makes me think there might still be hope for me. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Not a fan of Golden Showers, but still a great read.

lowkeyonelowkeyoneover 7 years ago
GOOD ONE

What a great little story and well told. Thank you.

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