by Amyfriend
One of my favorite combo's. What a neat story with some nicely done hot scenes that gave me hard-on after hard-on. He may have been an old coot but he sure knew how to please a young lady. Please keep writing these great stories.
Another nice story from you, Amy. Thanks! This one is sweet and tender as well as being sexy and having a satisfying completeness.
One suggestion is that you try to get the use of "lay" and "lie" right. For instance you wrote "I told him to lay right back, so I could get to him better." That should be "I told him to lie right back ...." I mention it because I have noticed the error in several of your stories. I know that it is a fairly common error made by other writers and speakers but your getting it right would make your work more sophistocated.
I like most of your stories a lot. Please keep writing for us!
I can relate to the Monster but not, unfortunately, as regards to size.
Well drawn characters and the sex was a naturally progressing part of nicely written story. I think you have drawn heavily on your own life experiences here (and in your other stories too) and it shows in your sympathy for your characters.
Always glad to read your offerings.
Your mind must go 100 miles an hour but so far I like this one the best. Maybe because I am an older man and makes me think there might still be hope for me. :)