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by Anonymous

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by TeeTee04/22/06

Mmmm...

Very nice seductive flow
thanks for the read

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by champagne198204/22/06

Too much of a good thing?

I appreciate alliteration exercises, but you have a lot of repetitious sounds stacked one on the other, making it difficult to enjoy the way they roll off my tongue.

One person's view...

Carrie

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by Anonymous04/23/06

your

use of alliteration only strengthens the seduction and pull...ty..blue

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