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Jocelyn

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by Anonymous04/28/06

Hot story !!!

A totally hot story ! I loved it !!! Good writing style, good imagination, good stuff all around !!

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by KewlBlueTiger04/29/06

King me!

The king was a smooth mover in this one. I wonder what he has in store for Jocelyn in the palace, and what the Queen will think - if there is one. Good descriptions. I liked it.

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by Anonymous12/05/06

Fuckin hot

Fuckin hot hot hot

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by Anonymous10/11/07

Chapter 2?

The king definitely was a smooth one in this story! It was a very interesting twist. Perhaps you could elaborate more of the story in another chapter?

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by Anonymous07/21/11

More!!!!!!!

TOO SHORT WANTED MORE........

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by avengiline05/23/16

ehh......

Personally I think it didn't have enough substance. You can't rush sex, love or lust. It's needed to be little more drawn out and if he cared for her in anyway I think he would have fucked her.
They didn't know each other. It seems like she's gonna be his concubine....and 6'9".....a little freaky, no? I'm 5'2", so he's a giant to me and I wouldn't go anywhere near him....like ever....what if he fell...I would die.....

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