A great write and a great read. Thank You. Ronnie W.
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Anonymous10/19/06
yum
Fries are a must when you hit a fast food joint.. and i wouldnt mind a side of fries like that. Yum!
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Anonymous02/12/07
Good story
That was a nice story. You don't get many of them here.
It was actually believable they started having sex every lunchtime and it developed into a relationship.
I don't believe she inheireted money and stopped working at the fast food place.
It would have been more realsitic if she landed a job as branch manager somewhere else and then it developed into a realtionship. Apart from that one niggle, the story was great.
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Anonymous11/16/13
well that was different
got a bit confusing at the end as obviously a big chunk of the story missing...would have been nice to know what was in the package and a bit of what went on afterwards....
English
Great!
I absolutely loved your story! And, it had a happy ending, which made it even better! Keep up the good work.. you're an awesome writer!
Absolutely loved it
A great write and a great read. Thank You. Ronnie W.
yum
Fries are a must when you hit a fast food joint.. and i wouldnt mind a side of fries like that. Yum!
Good story
That was a nice story. You don't get many of them here.
It was actually believable they started having sex every lunchtime and it developed into a relationship.
I don't believe she inheireted money and stopped working at the fast food place.
It would have been more realsitic if she landed a job as branch manager somewhere else and then it developed into a realtionship. Apart from that one niggle, the story was great.
well that was different
got a bit confusing at the end as obviously a big chunk of the story missing...would have been nice to know what was in the package and a bit of what went on afterwards....
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