I love it. I love it. I love it.
You spin a web with words so awesome, I've been captured forever. I'm so glad you continued their story. Thanks so much. Is this a new beginning or the end?
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Anonymous04/29/06
THANK YOU!!!!
I've been looking for their return and I'm so glad to see you did it. Just don't rush it so much. I savor every minute with them.
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Anonymous04/29/06
amazing
Thank you for bringing Luc and Sanaii back and continuing their story. I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see how things work out for the two of them.
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Anonymous04/30/06
MORE PLEASE
Like eveyone else, THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT STORY. you have to write MORE, soon.
While this is a scene you ended it here? I will go looking for more--please
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Anonymous04/24/13
wow!!
Just Wow!!!
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Anonymous07/16/13
Disapointed: another cliched pregnancy story
Such a disapointement: I love their story in college and how it ended; I loved the beginning of this new series, and the realistic way their relationship evolved, and now it is back to the same ol' same ol' baby-story-that-will-make-them-be-together-for-rea l-because-only-pregnancy-can-validate-a-woman...Wh at happened to having a smart female lead who has sex AND is on birth control especially if she decides to go bare with her FWB? Was it to much to asked?? What happened to just make the choice to be together without some baby involved? Such a waste of a good story...
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Anonymous07/16/13
hater
The person under me is a hater. I love your story so far. Great job. Your story, your ideas great work.
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Anonymous07/20/13
I was all in until...
"I'll be having your beautiful beige baby"...Really?! How old are they again (that was a rhetorical question). Most importantly, no one says stuff like that. I like the story, just not that line.
yeah people do talk like that, I'm a black woman married to a white man and we always joke about the potential color of kids we may produce. it's reality and shouldn't be taken seriously.
They're back!
I love it. I love it. I love it.
You spin a web with words so awesome, I've been captured forever. I'm so glad you continued their story. Thanks so much. Is this a new beginning or the end?
THANK YOU!!!!
I've been looking for their return and I'm so glad to see you did it. Just don't rush it so much. I savor every minute with them.
amazing
Thank you for bringing Luc and Sanaii back and continuing their story. I enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait to see how things work out for the two of them.
MORE PLEASE
Like eveyone else, THANKS FOR ANOTHER GREAT STORY. you have to write MORE, soon.
I absolutely loved this.
I myself am in an interracial marriage with beautiful kids. Thank you for this steamy story.
WOOT
Amazing what you can find when you look!
it ends there?!!
While this is a scene you ended it here? I will go looking for more--please
wow!!
Just Wow!!!
Disapointed: another cliched pregnancy story
Such a disapointement: I love their story in college and how it ended; I loved the beginning of this new series, and the realistic way their relationship evolved, and now it is back to the same ol' same ol' baby-story-that-will-make-them-be-together-for-rea l-because-only-pregnancy-can-validate-a-woman...Wh at happened to having a smart female lead who has sex AND is on birth control especially if she decides to go bare with her FWB? Was it to much to asked?? What happened to just make the choice to be together without some baby involved? Such a waste of a good story...
hater
The person under me is a hater. I love your story so far. Great job. Your story, your ideas great work.
I was all in until...
"I'll be having your beautiful beige baby"...Really?! How old are they again (that was a rhetorical question). Most importantly, no one says stuff like that. I like the story, just not that line.
I found the last line as a way of bringing levity too a heavy situation something similar to what I'd use
to Anon 7/20
yeah people do talk like that, I'm a black woman married to a white man and we always joke about the potential color of kids we may produce. it's reality and shouldn't be taken seriously.
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