Sanaii had to experience a real love with Jared in order for her and Luc's relationship to grow into more than just friends w/benefits. I think if those two had gotten married just bc she was pregnant it would not have lasted--he would have cheated and she would never known what she was truly worth. Luc matured and deserved to suffer some, but he sure went after his family. As for Alisa, she was second choice and knew it. I kinda wish she had had a little one by Jared and Luc could have help raised her.
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Anonymous05/03/12
hit it out the ballpark!
So glad you continued their story. No negatives. Except that I could not seem to stop reading, well past the time for me to sleep. Just could not stop! Please write more. Such a great read!
One of the best romance stories i have ever read. Kepp on going man.
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Anonymous03/18/13
Awesome
I loved this story and the characters were fantastic. Wish they could have added to the family before it end. Wonderful
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Anonymous05/13/13
Okay....
TWO years later & the kid is speaking in full sentences and hugging her around the waist? He knows how to pronounce Hawaii?! Get a fucking clue!
She was five months pregnant when you ended the last chapter, that would make the kid about 14 months old, ya idiot!
My gawd!
Like really... I understand fantasy but get real!
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Anonymous06/23/13
wonderful!
started out a little muddled, but everything (characters, dialouge, plot, writing) got better and turned out to be a sexy sweet HEA! thanks for the great read!!
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Anonymous07/03/13
To Anonymous 5/12/13
Clearly you lack reading comprehension skills or perhaps you can't follow a clearly laid out timeline. She met Jared when she was 5 months pregnant, they were married 8 months later. Jared died 6 years later. Luc got divorced, Luc came after Sanaii. All these things happened over YEARS, ya numbnuts. You expect the kid to still be saying "googoo gaga" after all that time? Why am I even entertaining this troll!? Jeesh!
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Anonymous07/10/13
Great Read
I have to say ever since I stumbled upon this page I have read some life effecting stories and a lot of clit effecting stories.... loved both stories, and I think you did a great job......you captured me, and really had me nose deep and experiencing feelings a lot of authors are not able to do.....there's just telling a story, there's telling a great story, and there's telling a great story while initiating different feelings through out your readers.....and that's you.....I don't normally leave comments, except when some dumb ass hole's comment is so fucking stupid you cant help but respond.....remember as a great anything you will always have haters.....but also congratulators......and I huelust am congratulating you on 2 stories well written......to Anonymous 5/12/13 learn to add and read because he clearly stated years had went by......grow up or better yet this is an adult website comment back when you mature.....GOOD LUCK huelust
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Anonymous07/16/13
Great, great one...
Really good story, one of the best I have read so far here. Would have loved more backstory for Sanai, maybe some other friends than Luc, to flesh out her character. It was more of a story about Luc's maturity; but it was well written, without dragging unnecessarily with back and forth bullshit or emotional turmoil, angst, etc. I loved how they spoke honestly about their feelings, even during the FWB part. Was a bit surprised by the pregancy bit, fearing it might ruin the story but it was very well developed : that is not what made them be together again, it created a bond but they had to, Luc had to grow and mature and choose to be in this relationship. Even the "triangle" was well written, and I always HATE triangle story ! ! ;) I liked the fact that Sanai and Jared loved each other, and had a happy family and that Sanai wasn't stupidely "torn" (expect for that time when Luc checked her out, bu then the way she reacted to Jared's vulnerability was just great!! Although Jared's death was a bit of an easy copout...) Good job and thanks Huelust
i just love this story and read it every chance i get.
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Anonymous04/24/14
love!!
That was great, got misty when Jared came into the picture love Luc and Sa together but then I cried when he died. Thank you so much for sharing it was hot and heart warming
I know you wrote this almost like a while ago. However, I just stumbled upon it and i literally could not get enough. You wrote something magical here. I am so happy I found this. Like I felt every emotion possible. Happiness, sadness, anger, and contentment at the ending. I am satisfied. . . for now. lol but I know I am going to be looking for more of Luc and Sa'. This story was a perfect 10/10 you are the SHIT for real.
English
Good story
So well written! I loved the reality of it. Thank you!
Very Enjoyable Story
I really enjoyed it!
it was good she married Jared first
Sanaii had to experience a real love with Jared in order for her and Luc's relationship to grow into more than just friends w/benefits. I think if those two had gotten married just bc she was pregnant it would not have lasted--he would have cheated and she would never known what she was truly worth. Luc matured and deserved to suffer some, but he sure went after his family. As for Alisa, she was second choice and knew it. I kinda wish she had had a little one by Jared and Luc could have help raised her.
hit it out the ballpark!
So glad you continued their story. No negatives. Except that I could not seem to stop reading, well past the time for me to sleep. Just could not stop! Please write more. Such a great read!
Yum
Just yum....................
5 stars
One of the best romance stories i have ever read. Kepp on going man.
Awesome
I loved this story and the characters were fantastic. Wish they could have added to the family before it end. Wonderful
Okay....
TWO years later & the kid is speaking in full sentences and hugging her around the waist? He knows how to pronounce Hawaii?! Get a fucking clue!
She was five months pregnant when you ended the last chapter, that would make the kid about 14 months old, ya idiot!
My gawd!
Like really... I understand fantasy but get real!
wonderful!
started out a little muddled, but everything (characters, dialouge, plot, writing) got better and turned out to be a sexy sweet HEA! thanks for the great read!!
To Anonymous 5/12/13
Clearly you lack reading comprehension skills or perhaps you can't follow a clearly laid out timeline. She met Jared when she was 5 months pregnant, they were married 8 months later. Jared died 6 years later. Luc got divorced, Luc came after Sanaii. All these things happened over YEARS, ya numbnuts. You expect the kid to still be saying "googoo gaga" after all that time? Why am I even entertaining this troll!? Jeesh!
Great Read
I have to say ever since I stumbled upon this page I have read some life effecting stories and a lot of clit effecting stories.... loved both stories, and I think you did a great job......you captured me, and really had me nose deep and experiencing feelings a lot of authors are not able to do.....there's just telling a story, there's telling a great story, and there's telling a great story while initiating different feelings through out your readers.....and that's you.....I don't normally leave comments, except when some dumb ass hole's comment is so fucking stupid you cant help but respond.....remember as a great anything you will always have haters.....but also congratulators......and I huelust am congratulating you on 2 stories well written......to Anonymous 5/12/13 learn to add and read because he clearly stated years had went by......grow up or better yet this is an adult website comment back when you mature.....GOOD LUCK huelust
Great, great one...
Really good story, one of the best I have read so far here. Would have loved more backstory for Sanai, maybe some other friends than Luc, to flesh out her character. It was more of a story about Luc's maturity; but it was well written, without dragging unnecessarily with back and forth bullshit or emotional turmoil, angst, etc. I loved how they spoke honestly about their feelings, even during the FWB part. Was a bit surprised by the pregancy bit, fearing it might ruin the story but it was very well developed : that is not what made them be together again, it created a bond but they had to, Luc had to grow and mature and choose to be in this relationship. Even the "triangle" was well written, and I always HATE triangle story ! ! ;) I liked the fact that Sanai and Jared loved each other, and had a happy family and that Sanai wasn't stupidely "torn" (expect for that time when Luc checked her out, bu then the way she reacted to Jared's vulnerability was just great!! Although Jared's death was a bit of an easy copout...) Good job and thanks Huelust
Great story
I loved your story
WOW
SO GOOD
From beginning to the end...
Awesome story!!!
Ughhh i hate you so much for writing this because now I've read it and got so wrapped up I didn't want it to end... loved Jared and Lucas
i just love this story and read it every chance i get.
love!!
That was great, got misty when Jared came into the picture love Luc and Sa together but then I cried when he died. Thank you so much for sharing it was hot and heart warming
I love this storry!!
You have created two characters in Sanaii and Luc that I rooted for from the very beginning. I am so thrilled that you shared this sfory.
Well then you sure know how to pull at all of my emotions. I love the the story.keep doing wat your doing., your writing is wonderful.
I love years long stories
But Holy fuck if this isn't the best one I've ever read.
Your Stories Are Sugar!!!!!!
Write more ooooooo!!!
I can't stop crying god damnit.
Dude I was crying through at least 4 or 5 of the chapters. This was great. Mother fucking 10/10 it was beautiful. Such gret. Much butiful. Wow.
Like OMG!
I know you wrote this almost like a while ago. However, I just stumbled upon it and i literally could not get enough. You wrote something magical here. I am so happy I found this. Like I felt every emotion possible. Happiness, sadness, anger, and contentment at the ending. I am satisfied. . . for now. lol but I know I am going to be looking for more of Luc and Sa'. This story was a perfect 10/10 you are the SHIT for real.
I loved it
It's been awhile since you initially wrote this but, it was spectacular. Thank you for sharing
Still
Love this series and look forward to Any updates...Hint!
5 *****
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