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Luc and Sanaii: Scenes from a Life Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/02/06

Good Story

Sometimes it takes a long time for a man to grow up.

Boyd

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by milf2605/02/06

A fantastic series!

I have read each and every installment thinking that this is my favorite story of all the stories I've read on the site.

Great job on creating such real and likable characters, and a novella that is satisfying in every way. you are a fantastic writer! thank you for sharing Luc and Sanaii with all of us.

Milf26

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by Anonymous05/02/06

brava!

It was a wonderful series. Thanks for writing it. It was beautiful from beginning to end. Keep up the good work.

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by Anonymous05/02/06

Fantastic

Great story!?!?!

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by Anonymous05/02/06

Great

I love this story its my favorite of all stories written here. Thank You.

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by DanielOrme05/02/06

Wonderful series

A real story, beautifully told, with characters that develop as time goes by. A black woman, a white man, great romance, great sex. What more could I ask for?

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by Anonymous05/03/06

Great Story

There are very few stories that have great sex and wonderful romance. This series is one of those few. I loved it as a black woman (romance) and as a freak for interracial love (sex). Please keep up the writing. Maybe the next story can have some intrigue.

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by JazzMatthews05/03/06

Finally!

They are official together! Girl, I read all these chapers in the past hour and I couldn't stop! I was almost worried if they would ever get together, even though Jared sounded VERY hot. Very well done, Huelust and don't keep us waiting for more stories just like that!

Fan always,
~Jazz~

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by Anonymous05/04/06

Wonderful!!!!

I just wanted to thank you for writing such a wonderful series! Every chapter had me on the edge of my seat! All too often I see interracial stories that just involve sex instead of the possibility of true love. Your series involved romance, love, and incredible sex....can't get any better than that. This is truly the best series I've ever read! Keep them coming!!

Latrice

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by Anonymous05/21/06

great story!!!

This series and your previous one are fantastic! Not only were your sex scenes great, but you put together a story that really held my interest!!! I hope you get the chance to publish some material.

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by Anonymous06/19/06

You Are The BEST!

This is by far the best series I have read here. I love interracial story lines that are full of human failings, love and ROMANCE. Thank you for not writing a story that was just about scratching a "jungle itch". What a beautiful love story. YOU ROCK!!!

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by Anonymous07/24/06

I just read luc and sanaii's story

and I was thoroughly impressed with how they evolved as a couple. I was near tears at the end. I hope you write more for literotica. you have a very strong writing talent. the series was very romantic and very real. thanks for sharing.

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by wildwildbest09/01/06

beautiful

skipped a few of the chapters, but this is good stuff...you are a talented writer who knows how to truly tell a story. Wild

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by stepsonic09/17/06

Astonished

That was amazing! You're deffinitely a fave!

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by Anonymous10/22/06

sooo good

when im bored i come to this site to read stories...since im often bored, i come here a lot.. in all this time i have not read a story that equals yours..best writter on this site. your characters are dynamic. i felt like i was reading a soap opera..PLEASE keep writting. preferably chapters

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by Anonymous11/05/06

Amazing

I can't believe how good the story was. The whole series was just the bomb. Actually I'm in high school and it's not unusual where I live for all the girls to read erotic sex books with a good story line and plot. Of course our parents don't know. My best friend is even published on this site. I absoulutely loved it! I encourage you to pursue writing an erotic novel. Think about it for real cause if you do I can't wait to read it.

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by Anonymous11/20/06

Beautiful!

I love the story of Luc and Sanai! From beginnning to end..I love the happy ending!

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by CharlesJ12/04/06

Holy Cow!!!!

I stumbled upon your story quite by accident and I have to say this story is simply stunning. One of the most beautiful interacial love story ever written.

Great stuff!!!

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by Anonymous12/21/06

OMG!!!!

I sooooo loved this story. You should so write a novel. I'm 17 and mixed with black and white and it makes me happy to know that there are others who can see beyond someone's skin color and just see beauty. Fareal write a novel....I'd buy it.

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by Anonymous12/22/06

You're Awesome Huelust!!!

I love love love how you weave a story. You let them fall in love with others even though Sanaii was pregnant with Lucs' child but you didn't want them to feel forced into a marriage based on nescessity and you still let Luc stay as Ts' dad and be a father to him without taking away Jared's manhood then even after the tragedy that took Jared away from Sanaii plus you didn't let Sanaii come between Luc and his wife Alisa instead you let there marraige run their inevitable course which lead to divorce through irreconcilable differences then you had them come full circle to the realization that through everything that had happened between them they still love each other.

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by Anonymous01/30/07

AW MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNN!!!!!!

EXCELLLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED this story!!!! The best I've read on this site.

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by Anonymous04/03/07

Glorifying Interracial Love

This writer so very skillfully extolls the joys of interracial sex. It is a pleasure to read such well written material on this subject.

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by Anonymous04/07/07

Completely blown away.

That was the best story ever...

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by Afrosintrk05/04/07

Awesome...just awesome

You had me crying and worried when she met Jay...but...he fell for him too and then never was so happy to see her get together with her one true love..thanks for this

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by SecretFantasy6907/20/07

So this is like the story....

I re-read when I'm aching for a good IR romance. Thank you and please write another! You're amazingly talented.

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by Anonymous07/20/07

A Must Read!!!

This had all the makings of a good story - well written, great storyline, great dialogue, romantic, and scorchingly hot & sexy. Truly a wonderful story to read. Thank you!

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by ss101ss07/21/07

Oh My God!

This was absolutely stunning!! I had to read it again once I'd finished it the first time around because I was completely taken aback by how good it was! I love the fact that although the sex was incredibly hot and passionate, the characters actually had 'character'. I found myself holding my breath hoping that things would eventually work out between them. It's almost like reading an adult fairy story! Thank you so much for a great read. I look forward to any more of your writing.

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by Anonymous08/01/07

Excellente

This was a really good read. I just happened upon this story by accident. It kept me spellbound from beginning to end. Race does not matter to me. Love is what matters. Good portrayal of love regardless of race. I hope there is more on these two!!

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by Anonymous08/20/07

A True Romance

This was an excellent read. I loved the characters, Luc, Sa, and Jared. You should try and get this published by one of those ebook publishers.

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by Anonymous12/12/07

FANTASTIC ! YOU ARE SO TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I stumbled accross it,and kept reading it from beginning to end! Just couldn't stop! So well written! BRAVO.Please give us another one.I'm sure you'll get published if you're not already!

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by Basra12/21/07

Bravo

This was a really great read. Fantastic job describing the passion between your two main characters. This really blew me away!

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by Anonymous08/18/08

enjoyable read

I've totally enjoyed this entry...couldn't sleep until I had read it all...

These characters were real, and the story was realistic..
I do believe this story covered a range of emotions ,having a child together and having a bond that continued to grow,they both are now mature and have had other patners(she truly love hers and him, well he tried) , now they can approached this relationship with a sense of maturity, this is shown by him offering marriage and she recognises this and accepts...perhaps another child on the way...

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by ladyalchemy09/12/08

dreamy

This was such a lovely way to end this great story.

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by Anonymous09/15/08

wow

I really enjoyed this story. Loved all of the characters. So happy they found their way back to each other. Wonderfuly written.

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by 03/03/09

One word...

AWESOME! Ok, maybe several. You should put this under romance, because that's more the theme than their complexion differences. At least that's what I got out of this story. Fantastic read! Keep up the excellent work, and please post more stories.

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by NS1103/14/09

Perfect

I have to admit, that I was extremely pissed off when they started going their separate ways and marrying other people. I guess that's what makes you a writer, and me a reader. Your ability to evoke emotion. Because I so did not like that scene with her eating another mans cum while she was pregnant. However, you did a great job of bringing them back together, even after a tragedy. Which, I totally did not expect. All I can say is. Bravo!

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by Anonymous05/24/09

Awesome

What a wonderful story. It had is highs and low's that sure makes a great read. Loved all the characters of this story. Great job.

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by Trinity7107/26/09

Ahhhh....love it!!

I really enjoyed Luc & Sanaii's story.
I must have read it 3-4 times already and still can't get enough.
Huelust, you're a very talented writer.

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by Anonymous12/06/09

hot!!

nice

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by SouthernFemme02/28/10

i love the journey that these two took together. It was beautiful and so damn hot!

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by Anonymous03/31/10

Luved This Storie!

Ever time i heard Jared name i feel like crying, he really was a good man...:'(

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by prugirl04/25/10

Very nice

Nice conclusion to a beautiful love story. Well done!

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by Anonymous06/11/10

Trickster

Amazing Series/stories! It was sooo well written...I didn't want it to end :D

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by Anonymous07/12/10

A beautiful Series!!!

I throughly enjoyed reading this series. Thank you for allowing them to get together in the end.

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by Jujubee5011/11/10

Excellent ending! Good of Lucas to remember those wise words from Jared.

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by Anonymous11/20/10

beautiful

excellently written, good character depth... real feeling for the characters, which i think is rare. very well done.

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by Anonymous11/24/10

AMAZING!

I absolutely loved it. No words to express the passion between them; it even made me cry! Very talented writer, you are.

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by Anonymous10/17/11

Love it!

Beautiful. I love it!

N.O.K

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by cassandraharper11/27/11

Girl,

I love your stories. When will you start writing again?

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by emj41701/22/12

Excellent!

This story was fantastic and thank you for sharing your talent.

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