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"For high vaulted arches

For deep velvet shrines"

you have a reputation (with me at least) for your soundplay-- well not play-- hmmm for using thhe repetition of sounds in your poetry. Sometimes it goes too far, but in this poem, it works Just Right. I mean look at those two lines!!!

This poem made me thirsty.

The title is perfect.

~aswirls

like moments of filled with the kind of memories I would have remembered...tis nice to have such to look back upon...tis a blessing...wonderful insightful look into the pages of your past..ty...blue