All Comments on 'A Dirty-Thirty Birthday'

by Sugar-ray

Sort by:
  • 29 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
incredible

Incredible story, would love to hear more, maybe from her first experiences being a slut, or, of course, the rest of their vacation

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
How about a time out folks!

Okay, children...let's all spell it together...ready...F A N T A S Y. Okay, kids...back at it...slug, punch, Awwooo! Grow up...get a life - it's only fantasy.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Sad....

Story is all fucked up. Unless she is infertile, if she is not on birth control, there is entirely too much sperm being shot into her without her getting pregnant, even if most of her fucking is not done when she is ovulating. This story needs proof-reading, BADLY!

ParklifeParklifealmost 18 years ago
Thanks!!

Loved the story and hope you decide to continue writing of their dirty-thirty vacation. I know i'd love to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
dont be irresponsible

i know this is fantasy, but unprotected sex is dangerous now-a-days. let's be grounded in reality for just a little bit in here.

who in here would gangbang a slut w/o protection?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
GREAT writing.

Ignore these insecure losers that get on here and cry about the story. (Isn't that a strange thing to do?) Anyhow - this deserves a BEST OF GENRE award. GREAT work. HOT!

seacoastcoupleseacoastcouplealmost 18 years ago
So very hot!

I love this! It is so incredibly erotic. I don't care what the naysayers post...this is highly erotic work. We play a little....maybe once every couple of years but this just sounds like fun!

A++++++++

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
good account of what goes on with couples like us!

loved it!! i have licked my wife after loads of guys have fucked her!! its the most exciting sex there is!! greg uk

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great

this is a very erotic story, i love to fuck my girl when she has a fresh load of cum inside her, looking in her pussy and seeing a load of some guys cum almost dripping out then sticking my cock n her is the best feeling there is, i wish sugar-ray would write more adventures

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
OH YEAH!

Loved it!!!!!!!!!! The only thing better than cleaning my wife up is getting it straight from the cock when I pull him out by his sac and get it straight from him......More, please

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not

Oh Yeah, think I will pass on two and three!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sick

Sick,Sick.

AMRJRBRIGAMRJRBRIGover 13 years ago
Creampie

Like a few of the other responders, I too love to lick and suck my wife's pussy after another guy has fucked her and filled her up with cum. And I also love the sensation of sloppy seconds-the sensation of sliding my cock into my wife's pussy while it is already full of cum. Awesome! Since she got over her inhibitions she has taken her panties off for quite a few guys and I find it extremely exciting that she does that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
excellent story

I have never had the pleasure of eating a cream pie. It's my fantasy that some guy will fill his wife or girfriend's pussy with his cum and then let me clean up the mess

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great story

I love eating creampie from my girl's well used pussy, fantasy for some, a lifestyle for others and a wish for the rest. I love when my girl squats over my head and drains her pussy in my mouth

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Damn,what an idiotic perverted shit of a "story" !

This feeble minded attempt of this inept "writer" sounds like rambling of a mental asylum graduate !!

One of the most pathetic "story" I ever skipped thru !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great Story

Thank you for a hot and sexy story...loved it.

Please write some more, like how you describe your wife, its hot !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
One star is too many!

Damn, I wish I had the opportunity to give a negative number.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Loved It

This is exactly the kind of story I love to read. I was once a cuckold and loved it like the husband in this story. I miss that lifestyle.

OOAAOOAAalmost 11 years ago
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EXCELLENT story!!!!!

Very well written and with a high level of sensuality and erotism!!!

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Even for a fictional story

This is just wrong. I wonder if they care about her getting pregnant or catching a social disease? And who the hell wants to have a slut for a wife? Yep - NO ONE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
And winner

I have been there with my wife, it feels so good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
piggy wimp

200 guys - that's a downright slut. you're the pussy cleaner.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
slut of the year

That was the best and she is the best.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This story gave me a boner.....

I liked it. It turned me on even though I do not wish this for myself and my partner.

usemyhotwifeusemyhotwifealmost 9 years ago
Good job

Just like my wife and I.

It is a turn on waiting for the the little whore to come home after fucking her lover/s.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
At least

At least you knew April was a whore when you married.her. Luckily, you were a budding cuck.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good luck when his Dick falls off from some VD.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Imagine reading a fake story and then being like, "Der she gonna get a VD." It's called fantasy, you clown. You must be real fun at the movies "Derp You cant just throw a truck at a Dragon?!!!" Why are you here? Why are you reading stories you clearly hate and then complaining at the end of it like a child that doesnt know how to stop touching the oven while it's hot? You sound like complete idiots. You keep reading stories you hate and never learn your lesson. So dumb.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous