homeErotic PoetryA Taste of YesterdayPublic Comments

All Comments  for

A Taste of Yesterday

bybluerains©
All
Comments (3)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by lobomao04/27/06

•)

sweet sweet memory
and strong spiced tea
between my lips spread
just enough for strawberries
with just a hint of sugar
may i force my hand
to remember the delicates
of that summer day
one life is enough for me
when summer can be that full

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by My Erotic Trail04/27/06

taste of yesterday

inspires me... taste of yesterday... (~_~) bows humble... nice write blue~

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Amyfriend01/30/07

Mmmm...how sweet..

especially with those "sugar soaked strawberries dipped in schnapps."

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to A Taste of Yesterday  or
More submissions by bluerains.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission.

Post comment as (click to select):

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel