Thanks for your comments, well the first one anyway. Glad you appreciated it.
To the other comment, I don't mind negative criticism; that's why I enabled public comments. It would be really helpful though if you could explain exactly what you thought was wrong with it.
I think I see what you mean. There's no 'emotional' content to the story. It's simply a description of certain acts. Next time maybe I'll try and make my characters 'believable'.
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all girls'dream
We have all dreamed of being a princess, this is so much better! thank you
I've read the 13 year old boy wet dreams here
and now I read what hte 13 year old girl dreams of.
Thanks
Thanks for your comments, well the first one anyway. Glad you appreciated it.
To the other comment, I don't mind negative criticism; that's why I enabled public comments. It would be really helpful though if you could explain exactly what you thought was wrong with it.
Kisses,
Helen.
The whole story is
jerky and mechanical. I found nothing that even hints of erotisism in this. Sorry
Thanks BibleThumper
I think I see what you mean. There's no 'emotional' content to the story. It's simply a description of certain acts. Next time maybe I'll try and make my characters 'believable'.
Thanks again.
Helen.
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