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Very nice job!
That was hot! You got more of those brothers?
Why incest
The two men are brothers to each other but are not related to her. Her family consists of parents and sisters.
Maybe loving wives since one is married and he is cheating on his wife; but the Incest category puzzles me.
I second the..."Very Nice Job!"
Ok, you did use the wrong name ONCE and the category was a little iffy, but it didn't take away from the story! On the 1st, I just figured you were thinking descriptive and made a little goof, and on the 2nd, I for one am very happy there wasn't any guy on guy action which would of ruined the story for me, even if I did read it for the incest category. I enjoyed your story, and while constructive criticism is one thing, I think the other two USAs were just being jerks and nit-picky.
category changed....
Sorry about the name typo (I changed the names to protect......) as to the category...literotica changed that. To those who commented...thank you for the feedback.
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