All Comments on 'aZiaN PLaYa Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Oddly Romantic

I found certain aspects annoying, like the whole "aZiaN" thing, but overall, this story has enough hot sex and yet underlying sweetness to warrant a high score.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 13 years ago
nice

great so far thats 1 lucky bastard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice!

Very good twists and 'revelations'.

Jason

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

this guy revels in being a jerk ... and too much time is spent justifying why this could be acceptable ... doesn't work in life and the story goes downhill as one internalizes this ... no expectation of any socially-redeeming conscience on his part

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