All Comments on 'aZiaN PLaYa Ch. 04'

Lucky asian sonovabitch haha

ALL YOUR STORYS KEEP MY ATTENTION THROUHOUT......WRITE A BOOK OR TWO !!!!!!!

I've read every single piece you've put up here, and it's all great. Honestly, you could easily get a job as a short story writer with the way you write.

...Playa, NO!

This story inspired me.

I'm not Taiwanese, but I still want my loving girlfriend to grow old in financial comfort. I want a house where I can proudly say, "This is my House", and my wife will say "Damn right, you created a magnificent family and put us in comfort. You have more than fulfilled your duty as a Man."

So, I will work hard!

As a white guy living in Taiwan, so many details of your story are so dead on that it just kills me. I just look around everyday and see the (somewhat) toned down version of this guy. Absolutely dead on characterization and writing. From the gangsta attitude to the full service maids to the 'er puo'. Good stuff, real talent. Keep writing in the 'write what you know' mode (if not, extra props). It works.

You bounce around a little, and that was perfect. Really enjoyed the gradual growing up and the twist with the child bringing the maid into second wife status :)

Jason

I'm not rich, therefore theoretically when I read about the spoiled rich I find myself full of hatred and loathing...the erotica was awesome but I didn't really feel much of a story, and I'm not just saying that because I wanted the mc's life to come crashing down around him as he fell into an endless pit of tragedy and despair.

What a great way to write a story, hiding the immorality, kinkiness, wildness behind culture and custom.

Also excellent story writing skills.

Paul in Oklahoma