Awesomely written and something very sensual and exciting in all the roughness. Well written and nicely put together.
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Anonymous05/04/06
*mmm*
*smiles affectionately*....my Darling TQ, i'm so proud of You! congratulations on Your story being published...it was an exciting adventure that i shall not soon forget my One...ty for keeping O/our journey so exciting!...*whispers softly*...can W/we work on another one soon? *giggles playfully and winks at You sweetly*...fun! fun! fun! yay You Sir!...what do You think of this?..."It was a dark and stormy night..T/they were in the dungeon on this particular evening..." LOL whoo hoo!!! all my love to You my TQ...keep up the good work!....*hugs*...Your fire~ *xxx*
this one was hot and especially for being so new to this website, you've started off on good course. enjoyed this Sir and do hope to read more as it pleases you to releases new stories...Thank You for sharing with us, your readers. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Whoa boy, not kidding...and I was rushing through wanting the next bit so badly the print was literally a blur, lol. I loved Your first story as well, but with no insult meant at all, I have got to say Your power as a writer is really growing. This was a total mind rush. The kind of story you finish and just automatically think, damn I want one of those! Actually scratch that thought maybe, I'd get throttled in a week. Really, really yummy read. Now gimme more!!! Back to work TQ...er, please?
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Anonymous05/06/06
Great writing
Brilliantly written TQ, I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more from You.
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Anonymous05/31/06
mmm baby!
TQ... thank You for sharing Your story! It was simply marvelous!! i enjoyed it so much i read through it twice *blush* i will say that Your fire is a very lucky girl! :)
when will i learn to NOT read Tantrick stories before bed? (even though she did beg ALOT...weg)very well done.
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Anonymous10/08/07
add another chapter to this one please?
some of these stories are really great
why not add some chapters onto them?
they are all really good starts to what could be some really nice chaptered stories, ya know?
Love with the power that exudes from T and the sensualality of fire --- give them some more exposure PLEASE, Sir?
Marinetown, USA
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Anonymous06/11/09
you are such a jerk for letting her go
keeper of your heart and soul for years, then you threw her away? stupid
you weren't good enough for her, she deserved better than the likes of you
English
Nicely Done
Awesomely written and something very sensual and exciting in all the roughness. Well written and nicely put together.
*mmm*
*smiles affectionately*....my Darling TQ, i'm so proud of You! congratulations on Your story being published...it was an exciting adventure that i shall not soon forget my One...ty for keeping O/our journey so exciting!...*whispers softly*...can W/we work on another one soon? *giggles playfully and winks at You sweetly*...fun! fun! fun! yay You Sir!...what do You think of this?..."It was a dark and stormy night..T/they were in the dungeon on this particular evening..." LOL whoo hoo!!! all my love to You my TQ...keep up the good work!....*hugs*...Your fire~ *xxx*
I need a smoke
Good lord! my my my, hell I might need to be hosed down!
ummmm...yummmm
*catching my breath* TQ, Sir...what a rush. Really excellently done. ummmm....yeahhhh...i think i'll go to bed now. *grins*
nizah
i have to agree.....
this one was hot and especially for being so new to this website, you've started off on good course. enjoyed this Sir and do hope to read more as it pleases you to releases new stories...Thank You for sharing with us, your readers. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Think I am having a stroke...
Whoa boy, not kidding...and I was rushing through wanting the next bit so badly the print was literally a blur, lol. I loved Your first story as well, but with no insult meant at all, I have got to say Your power as a writer is really growing. This was a total mind rush. The kind of story you finish and just automatically think, damn I want one of those! Actually scratch that thought maybe, I'd get throttled in a week. Really, really yummy read. Now gimme more!!! Back to work TQ...er, please?
Great writing
Brilliantly written TQ, I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more from You.
mmm baby!
TQ... thank You for sharing Your story! It was simply marvelous!! i enjoyed it so much i read through it twice *blush* i will say that Your fire is a very lucky girl! :)
anastasia / leighsah
oh my!
when will i learn to NOT read Tantrick stories before bed? (even though she did beg ALOT...weg)very well done.
add another chapter to this one please?
some of these stories are really great
why not add some chapters onto them?
they are all really good starts to what could be some really nice chaptered stories, ya know?
Love with the power that exudes from T and the sensualality of fire --- give them some more exposure PLEASE, Sir?
Marinetown, USA
you are such a jerk for letting her go
keeper of your heart and soul for years, then you threw her away? stupid
you weren't good enough for her, she deserved better than the likes of you
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