All Comments on 'Pangaea'

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MyNecroticSnailMyNecroticSnailalmost 18 years ago
Playing with the plates

1st - way tooo intellectual, for some of this crowd

2nd - either you have several unexplored potentials, or divergent threads. Invisible plate with spoon in the continental drift, very good there. Anartica works.

3rd - homogenic and polyphony, I'm not getting the drift here, unless it works by being an obscure reference to Björk. I don't know it.

4th - you may think of me as a hateful person for thinking this less than wooonderful, and pointing out what doesn't work for me, so be it. It is pretty good.

fair_warningfair_warningalmost 18 years ago
Great stuff...

Just loved that final line......worked so well.

joeys-gamejoeys-gamealmost 18 years ago
Imagery

is awesome.

thanks.

lobomaolobomaoalmost 18 years ago
•) wonderful

take the plates

stacked as broken china

in all your yearny yens

porceline betrays its faults

under glaze of time

so conversation drifts

from back to forth

while we wait for seconds

sharing our bits of little bites

savoring this serving

and looking forward to the next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
i like plates too

tectonics such a marvelous way to pass the time..

enjoyed the poem, will need a few more reads to understand the significance of some of the particular words, but enjoyable, made me think. I also have apoem about plates, wanna read it?

:)

marrria

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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