Mistaken Identity

good story

but this boy messed up! what he should have done is while his mother and father and himself were standing together sometime the next day he should have asked his father why he stayed in the den all night instead of coming to sleep on the air matress as planned.do this while making strong eye contact with his mother!! lol that would have been an interesting reaction.

nice story,
don

OK

This story was OK; but somehow your stories are more believable and raunchier when you write from a girl's perspective
However your photo is delicious from MY perspective

Whew

I can say you can empty my dishwasher any time

Nice idea

Why is it when people write storys It becomes like a fishermans tale, things get over enlarged ;) Sometime it is better to keep it short like an advert, and we all enjoy an advert:)

Pretty goofy story

Sorry pal...but this story is pretty stupid.

Great job!

Great job! I really enjoyed it!

Pretty good but unrealistic

Your writing is quite good but I have to think that a foot long cock in the brown hole doesn't go in that easily. If you're giving a huge member to your character, play with that characteristic more realisticly.

I agree that this story would have potential for a follow-up if the son didn't switch place with his dad. His mom realising what she had done would make an interesting story.

room for further development

i liked it, but i think it could have been developed more, perhaps with the mom getting pregnant, and the son wondering who the daddy was, but a nice story well told i thought

Incestuos Fire

Do'nt understand the adverse comments. This is one really hot tale of incestuous sex.USA

ssimple question

what 18 year old virgin talks like that?

hot

don't hesitate to continue

14" cock huh? I'm sure.