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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/15/06

Very Hot!

Man that was a very hot story!

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by Gabriel Orr05/17/06

All the way up till...

It was a great story, up until the end. Though much of the story felt rushed, it seemed a nonissue as the flow of the story was nicely done, and the characters were easy to understand and follow. From the 'sitting on the stomach' part an on, though, felt extremely rushed and just didn't have that satisfactory 'climax' (no pun intended) these stories need. Nicely done otherwise, though!

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by Anonymous05/19/06

good story to jerk off to.

great story for jerking off which i certainly did while reading. good writing..keep it up. no pun intended there either. always like to read about juicy clits and pussy. love the taste. uummmmmmm good. thanks
richard

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by Anonymous03/16/15

poor car

I cant believe they keyed a lexus

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