by tarkatony
Not worth reading, the story begins in the middle and has no ending
As someone else remarked, it starts in the middle and ends early. If there is a follow-up (and I hope there is - I do enjoy the main character's snarky point of view), it might be better to have a longer, more complete, piece.
Wheres the rest of it? It was just gettin interestin then it ended =O