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Hot erotic couple rekindling their lust & love
Very good story line and the dialogue is very well done. You have each character coming alive to the mind as they express their feelings. That dialogue makes all the difference in letting us see the scene versus just describing what two people did. You have even more room to let us hear their own minds expressions of these wonderful thrills each are experiencing. Looking forward to more of this loving couple explore their renewed lust for each other.
Please keep writing this great entertainment.
You have talent
Sexy Exercise
As a woman who has experienced lust in the middle years, I'm astounded to read such a good story written from a woman's perspective. It is well written, and easy to read. Keep writing!
Rekindle their love?
That's the feeling I got, that he was being denied for quite some time. He has sexual frustration to work off. Why?? She has probably been denying him sex. Why?? She probably has a lover. She sounds passionate enough so what's the denial about??
Maybe we'll find out tonight when the kids are in bed?
That was really great....
Short but incredibly sweet. I love these rediscovering each other stories. The wife reminds me of my repressive wife. I only hope that she rediscovers me while I'm working out in the basement....
A fine start
regardless of first or tenth effort you tell a nice tale. Well crafted and a nice easy read. Keep writing 'cause I want to see where this story is headed. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Thanks for your nice comments!
Dear Readers,
Thank you very much for your nice comments on my story "Workout Incentive." Since this was my first story, I'm particularly happy to get your feedback. I was hoping the characters would be of interest to both women and men readers.
I have an arc of several chapters already partially written, so there's a lot more to come, I hope. Thanks for your encouragement!
- curl4ever
Nice and sweet
very romantic.
Nice and sweet
very romantic.
Nice and sweet
very romantic.
Great story! I can hardly wait to read the rest.
This story is exactly what this category is about. Not cheating on, degredation or humiliation of your partner. Just an actual loving couple. Thank you for the time and effort it took you to write this story.
Actually Wrong Catagory
A nice story but this is actually the wrong catagory for it. Romance is where this story belongs not Loving Wives. Loving Wives is a catagory for "adventurous wives" and that means cheating wives. Romance is exactly what it means, monogamous relationships. If you go to Sherlock's bio you will notice that he just doesn't like cheating wife stories so his opinion is a bit off the mark.
FANtastic!
Terrific job for your first time out! I see the comment about the Loving Wives category, but since I know where you are going with your continuing stories, I think you chose it fine.
Your thank you to me was quite unnecessary, you did all the work and there was nothing for me to do other than sit back and read a really enjoyable story!
Good luck...and make sure you get on Chapter 2 ASAP!!!!
Your Fan,
Honey123
WRONG CAT????
Actually what is NOT adventurous about a wife reconnecting with her sexuality AND her spouce.
I mean come on! she JUST NOW noticed his build? When I started working out my wife started making comments about the first month.
That's the problem with the 'LOVING WIFES' section. People think it HAS to have cheating wives and cuckolding.
NOPE. What about the 40something wife who wants to reignight her passions with her husband?
WHat about the 20something couple that gets into some new private 'action' in their bed?
What about the Young wife who is bemoaning her 'aweful' marrage who gets advice on how to strengthen it from the wise, and happy, widow from next door? With the flash backs to her happy and sexy monogamous marrage of course.
*sigh*
NOW to THIS story... I LOVE IT...cept for the selfish-ish wife...but then again.... you are writitng a story about reconnecting...abotu seeing what is RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU again for the first time.
PLEASE chapter 2 SOON!
I'm so proud of you!
I told you!! You are an excellent writer! Keep them coming curl . . . your audience demands it now . . . smiles. I'll be here for you if you need me . . . angel.
CATEGORY CHANGED
Apologies for my newbie error of mistakenly sending this to the "Loving Wives" category.
Many thanks to the submissions editors for moving this into "Romance."
Yow!
This was a delicious story. Can't wait to check out Chapter 2.
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