All Comments on 'Jesse's Brand Ch. 02'

Please? I like this story a lot.

This was worse than ripping out the last chapter of a paperback. Looking forward to your next submissions as there must be a lot more to come, keep up the good work.

I was hooked from the first story - now left dangling waiting for more - almost literal BDSM.

Please continue with this story, it is amazing very visual and intense. I cant wait to read on.

Cliff hangers that is. Cliff hangers are evil. Please, PLEASE, submit the next parts.

Please don't stop this story!!

Great story! This could be a great book. I want MORE. Really good stuff.

This is a neat story line and crossing the lines of western and mind control, has a very intreging reach.

please do

Got my interest now when are you going to add to the Story.

loving the story. surprised your not more well known. can't wait to read the next chapter. 5 stars

Why have you not continued your story line. When it just starts to get interesting you quit.

Please continue the story, i love the wild west, and this story is just starting to get good.

7 years! I guess I'll have to imagine a good ending.

I liked it but I want MORE!!!!

When are you, going to finish this story? I really cannot believe, you are going to waste this great story.

Please, I enjoyed what you have writen so far. I feel like I have picked up a good book that someone has torn out all the last pages.

I am sorry that Night-Wolf either forgot how to write or passed on to a better world. I would so much liked to have been able to readthe rest of this sory,

Where is the rest of this intriguing story? I feel left out in the cold...

Would have liked to read the whole story. Sorry you stopped submitting.

This is one of my problems with "authors" on this site. They write a chapter or two and then just stop... Don't submit unless you've written the entire story. That way you don't leave readers in a lurch.

Great story, when are you going to finish it?

Great introduction and build up.

Great potential for a novella

You need finish .You left this haging in the air.

I know it’s been awhile but you have a gift.

Entertain your readers and continue your tale.

Why did you stop this story in the middle of the story line?

When are you going to continue it?

Why did you stop in the middle off the story?