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MORE!!!!!
Please? I like this story a lot.
Finish it please, very good so far
This was worse than ripping out the last chapter of a paperback. Looking forward to your next submissions as there must be a lot more to come, keep up the good work.
I was hooked from the first story - now left dangling waiting for more - almost literal BDSM.
PLEASE GO ON
Please continue with this story, it is amazing very visual and intense. I cant wait to read on.
Evil...
Cliff hangers that is. Cliff hangers are evil. Please, PLEASE, submit the next parts.
strangely non-erotic but great to read
There is so little raw sex in this story, more romance and use of 'nudge nudge wink wink' and yet I really like it. BUT where is the next instalment!?!? I'm hungry for more.
Don't stop!!
Please don't stop this story!!
Please????????
Great story! This could be a great book. I want MORE. Really good stuff.
You should write moe.
This is a neat story line and crossing the lines of western and mind control, has a very intreging reach.
continued?
please do
You
Got my interest now when are you going to add to the Story.
keep going
loving the story. surprised your not more well known. can't wait to read the next chapter. 5 stars
Why?
Why have you not continued your story line. When it just starts to get interesting you quit.
please
Please continue the story, i love the wild west, and this story is just starting to get good.
Please
7 years! I guess I'll have to imagine a good ending.
MORE
I liked it but I want MORE!!!!
Jesse's Brand
When are you, going to finish this story? I really cannot believe, you are going to waste this great story.
MORE
Please, I enjoyed what you have writen so far. I feel like I have picked up a good book that someone has torn out all the last pages.
death of author
I am sorry that Night-Wolf either forgot how to write or passed on to a better world. I would so much liked to have been able to readthe rest of this sory,
. Dissapointment
Where is the rest of this intriguing story? I feel left out in the cold...
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