Ignore the Ass-hole telling you to learn how to spell... Your storie was very good KatieT... Please continue to write.. I cant wait for your next one... Larry ... And I am sorry if I mis-spelled anything... hehehe...
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Anonymous05/07/06
Good story
Enjoyed your story, and hope you will write more for us. Don't worry about "practise". Just remember that "practice" is a noun, and "practise" is a verb. I remember which is which by recalling 'prophesy' and 'prophecy' which, since they are pronounced differently, I can distinguish.
Aurelian
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Anonymous05/07/06
Superb
Fantastic!
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Anonymous05/07/06
GREAT story Katie
Katie,
The wankers who read and rate below 75 and then critise how great they thought it was'nt.Shows me just how many perfect people are out there,I wonder why they took the time to read your effot,maybe they read other's as their sick of reading their own shit and jealous of just how great other people are.
I'm looking forward to reading part2 of this wonderful story.
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Anonymous05/08/06
Not enough
Next time please finish it through to its natural end or write a part 2.
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Anonymous05/08/06
A hit
Normally, things move too fast. Hoiwever, you seem to realize that a woman teaching a man, it needs to be the way a woman would like her date/man to act in a perfect setting.
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Anonymous05/09/06
practice makes perfect
he definitely needs more lessons - and we're relying on you to make sure we get to read them
Contrary to the comment made by "Anonymous in Iraq" and one other (well-meaning) reviewer, the UK uses "practice" for the noun and "practise" for the verb, so your title is perfectly correct. It's amazing how rude some folks can be whilst displaying their own ignorance.
Making out with a girl is like many things, practice makes perfect. Few guys are born knowing how to do it right. I certainly was not. Having a girl who is willing to teach is a wonderful experience and can lead to many other good things.
Making out with a girl is like many things, practice makes perfect. Few guys are born knowing how to do it right. I certainly was not. Having a girl who is willing to teach is a wonderful experience and can lead to many other good things.
Nookiehunter
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Anonymous05/12/06
Criticise
Those who can't spell shouldn't criticize, either.
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Anonymous05/13/06
Loved It
A great story.
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Anonymous05/14/06
Wish I had a sister like this
Sweet, hot quickie. One of the best shorts in a long time. Please tell us more.
When her twin is accused of being a lousy lover - What's a sister to do? Well - it turns out that Sister, dear is a terrific Instructor. And the line forms...*grins* Fun Read!
I don't see how anyone could not like this story. There was only one thing wrong with it, and that is: You need to continue the story. It ended too quickly.
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Anonymous10/09/06
what the fuck
the author should go to hell...
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Anonymous11/26/06
Take me with you
If you do decide to go to hell ~ please consider tasking me with you. I want to hear the rest of the story and I want to be next in line for a lesson.
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Anonymous12/22/06
not bad
not bad, not bad...ended too fast..didnt really GET anywhere
When one makes such close-minded comments, then the writer must take that 'criticizm' with a grain of sand! This was a fantastic story and I surely hope you will continue writing and maybe present us with a second/third chapter in this saga. I really enjoyed it.
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Anonymous09/08/07
dont worry about the "authors" here.roflamo
great story.dont worry about the moron's who are so worried about spelling .your right of course about the 2 ways our countrys use the word. even if you werent right, ill say this again.this is a sex site.no matter that some people THINK their great artesians praticing their craft. its the story that counts here.not puncuation and capitalization no mater what these idiots think.theres no one from here going to be selling millions of copys of anything.just remember these people that want to critisize are here and they wouldnt be,if they were realy authors of anything.they would be published and wouldnt give this place the time of day.these wannabes that want to bitch about people are just trying to show their inteligence and in fact show their ignorence.
bottom line you have a great story here i cant wait to read the second chapter.
Katie, this was just beautiful.Very sensitive, very sexy and very realistic.Dont worry about critisisms that it finished too fast...it finished just where it should have..at the beginning of a lovely friendship.
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Anonymous12/20/07
Wow!!
What an incredibly hot story. You had me rock hard, throbbing and leaking pre-cum before I got to the end of it.
Thanks,
Mike from Louisiana
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Anonymous01/16/08
Learn to Spell
Not a bad story but you need to learn how to spell PRACTICE especially if it's in your title.
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Anonymous01/17/08
late comment
yes this is a late comment for the story, but just to say to the other people your spelling is not wrong. I am from America, and even though it is considered English we speak, it is a play off of REAL English which, well you guessed it, came from England.
The story was fantastic.
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Anonymous10/02/08
sister helps
Great story ! Wish one of my sisters would have helped me practice. Can't wait to see if they take it a step further in their practicing ! I know he wants to, is she willing to practice the next step with him ? I would have practiced with my sisters in a heartbeat !!
I can't believe that we somehow cannot accept the idea that, even though we share a common language which has a few minor differences, an appreciation of one's writing skills should not be diminished because of it. I loved your little tale and look forward to finding and enjoying more of your submissions. Thank you for sharing a fine talent.
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Anonymous07/22/09
spelling critice
sweet i thought it was great story and regaurds to the spelling critic, he was more than likely so turned on that he had to find something to critizes to make himself fill better......keep up the good work.
English
whoa
Very hot, looking forward to more installments.
Super great job!
I really enjoyed this! Well written, beleivable, and super erotic!
I Hope there will be more?
Great job!
awesome
can't wait for more
Beautiful
Not too nor too far, a beautiful story, keep it up.
roopmati
yum!
Very nice, perfectly paced, simple and sweet -- and I want more. Either a continuation of this, or other stories.
It is spelled PRACTICE!!
Get a fucking see and spell or spellcheck before you submit another crappy story.
Um...
Calm down. "Practise" is how they spell it over in England.
great stuff
I really liked the story
Second chapter?
Liked the story. Would like to see second chapter.
very Hott
Ignore the Ass-hole telling you to learn how to spell... Your storie was very good KatieT... Please continue to write.. I cant wait for your next one... Larry ... And I am sorry if I mis-spelled anything... hehehe...
Good story
Enjoyed your story, and hope you will write more for us. Don't worry about "practise". Just remember that "practice" is a noun, and "practise" is a verb. I remember which is which by recalling 'prophesy' and 'prophecy' which, since they are pronounced differently, I can distinguish.
Aurelian
Superb
Fantastic!
GREAT story Katie
Katie,
The wankers who read and rate below 75 and then critise how great they thought it was'nt.Shows me just how many perfect people are out there,I wonder why they took the time to read your effot,maybe they read other's as their sick of reading their own shit and jealous of just how great other people are.
I'm looking forward to reading part2 of this wonderful story.
Not enough
Next time please finish it through to its natural end or write a part 2.
A hit
Normally, things move too fast. Hoiwever, you seem to realize that a woman teaching a man, it needs to be the way a woman would like her date/man to act in a perfect setting.
practice makes perfect
he definitely needs more lessons - and we're relying on you to make sure we get to read them
Spellcheck
Contrary to the comment made by "Anonymous in Iraq" and one other (well-meaning) reviewer, the UK uses "practice" for the noun and "practise" for the verb, so your title is perfectly correct. It's amazing how rude some folks can be whilst displaying their own ignorance.
Loved reading this
Nice story.
Practice Makes Perfect
Making out with a girl is like many things, practice makes perfect. Few guys are born knowing how to do it right. I certainly was not. Having a girl who is willing to teach is a wonderful experience and can lead to many other good things.
Nookiehunter
Friendly Advice
Making out with a girl is like many things, practice makes perfect. Few guys are born knowing how to do it right. I certainly was not. Having a girl who is willing to teach is a wonderful experience and can lead to many other good things.
Nookiehunter
Criticise
Those who can't spell shouldn't criticize, either.
Loved It
A great story.
Wish I had a sister like this
Sweet, hot quickie. One of the best shorts in a long time. Please tell us more.
FAO Anon in Iraq
Email me if you hate it - your public comment tells me you have your own insecurities which run much deeper than my English spelling.
Great Practicing
Wow please please please write some more liked your work that is why we reald stories on Literotica
Sisterly Love!
When her twin is accused of being a lousy lover - What's a sister to do? Well - it turns out that Sister, dear is a terrific Instructor. And the line forms...*grins* Fun Read!
Very nice.
I don't see how anyone could not like this story. There was only one thing wrong with it, and that is: You need to continue the story. It ended too quickly.
what the fuck
the author should go to hell...
Take me with you
If you do decide to go to hell ~ please consider tasking me with you. I want to hear the rest of the story and I want to be next in line for a lesson.
not bad
not bad, not bad...ended too fast..didnt really GET anywhere
Let's Be Open-minded
When one makes such close-minded comments, then the writer must take that 'criticizm' with a grain of sand! This was a fantastic story and I surely hope you will continue writing and maybe present us with a second/third chapter in this saga. I really enjoyed it.
dont worry about the "authors" here.roflamo
great story.dont worry about the moron's who are so worried about spelling .your right of course about the 2 ways our countrys use the word. even if you werent right, ill say this again.this is a sex site.no matter that some people THINK their great artesians praticing their craft. its the story that counts here.not puncuation and capitalization no mater what these idiots think.theres no one from here going to be selling millions of copys of anything.just remember these people that want to critisize are here and they wouldnt be,if they were realy authors of anything.they would be published and wouldnt give this place the time of day.these wannabes that want to bitch about people are just trying to show their inteligence and in fact show their ignorence.
bottom line you have a great story here i cant wait to read the second chapter.
GREAT!
Katie, this was just beautiful.Very sensitive, very sexy and very realistic.Dont worry about critisisms that it finished too fast...it finished just where it should have..at the beginning of a lovely friendship.
Wow!!
What an incredibly hot story. You had me rock hard, throbbing and leaking pre-cum before I got to the end of it.
Thanks,
Mike from Louisiana
Learn to Spell
Not a bad story but you need to learn how to spell PRACTICE especially if it's in your title.
late comment
yes this is a late comment for the story, but just to say to the other people your spelling is not wrong. I am from America, and even though it is considered English we speak, it is a play off of REAL English which, well you guessed it, came from England.
The story was fantastic.
sister helps
Great story ! Wish one of my sisters would have helped me practice. Can't wait to see if they take it a step further in their practicing ! I know he wants to, is she willing to practice the next step with him ? I would have practiced with my sisters in a heartbeat !!
Great little tale!
I can't believe that we somehow cannot accept the idea that, even though we share a common language which has a few minor differences, an appreciation of one's writing skills should not be diminished because of it. I loved your little tale and look forward to finding and enjoying more of your submissions. Thank you for sharing a fine talent.
spelling critice
sweet i thought it was great story and regaurds to the spelling critic, he was more than likely so turned on that he had to find something to critizes to make himself fill better......keep up the good work.
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