I don't condone adultery. But, you wrote a good story that was both believable and enjoyable. I hope that you will post more like this and eliminate the trash you write that appeals to the sick motherfuckers that read it and praise you for posting it.
I just have to say a very well written story. It was one of those cannot stop reading stories, with a lot of great background and a believable plot.
Haven't seen one in a month I wanted to comment on but this was just great entertaiment
You can amaze at times.
PT
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Anonymous05/08/06
Loved it!
Fulls marks from me again (as usual). -- WhiteKnightAR
by
Anonymous05/08/06
Blows
As the cycle pulled up, the figure on the porch arose and smiled at the couple. But he quickly pulled the Garand from it's place beside him and fired a single shot into the cyclist forehead. The body slamming backwards from the concussion, a look of terror spread over Amy's face..........for only a milisecond, as the sights acquired her profile and the '06 roared again, bye,bye Amy. The brass hulls rattling down the porch and onto the walkway steps. JUST PLAIN BLOWN away
I'm shocked because no one hid in the closet, there weren't continuous gangbangs going on, nobody got off on 12" black schlongs, and no one got any cream pies. Just when you thought it was safe to read another JPB story, he goes and does this. Awful, I tells yah. Just awful.
;)
by
Anonymous05/06/07
W. T. F.
A J.P.B. story I like, this could be a problem, now I will have to read a little bit of his stories unless their in a different heading to make sure there not his usual. Thanks,Bob!
English
Good
Sometimes you surprise me with a turnabout from your usual storylines. This story was exellent, short, sharp and to the point. Well done Bob
Damn it Bob
A real classic! A very nice piece of writting.
A lot of truth in this Bob,
I assumed "troop shit" was a typo until I thought about my two experiences on one and decided it was pretty accurate!
This is a great story and was fun to read. It made me thing more than a little... what more could I ask for?
Regards, DJ
in truth ...
Lousy start, great finish.
-- KVK
Finally, a good one from Bob
I don't condone adultery. But, you wrote a good story that was both believable and enjoyable. I hope that you will post more like this and eliminate the trash you write that appeals to the sick motherfuckers that read it and praise you for posting it.
nice
A very good story I enjoyed the story line
When You Want To
Gosh bobie - is this you. A tale that flants your abilities that doesn't piss off the real men. How nice.
Thanks
Just a very well written story with a good plot
I just have to say a very well written story. It was one of those cannot stop reading stories, with a lot of great background and a believable plot.
Haven't seen one in a month I wanted to comment on but this was just great entertaiment
You can amaze at times.
PT
Loved it!
Fulls marks from me again (as usual). -- WhiteKnightAR
Blows
As the cycle pulled up, the figure on the porch arose and smiled at the couple. But he quickly pulled the Garand from it's place beside him and fired a single shot into the cyclist forehead. The body slamming backwards from the concussion, a look of terror spread over Amy's face..........for only a milisecond, as the sights acquired her profile and the '06 roared again, bye,bye Amy. The brass hulls rattling down the porch and onto the walkway steps. JUST PLAIN BLOWN away
What is the world coming to?
I'm shocked because no one hid in the closet, there weren't continuous gangbangs going on, nobody got off on 12" black schlongs, and no one got any cream pies. Just when you thought it was safe to read another JPB story, he goes and does this. Awful, I tells yah. Just awful.
;)
W. T. F.
A J.P.B. story I like, this could be a problem, now I will have to read a little bit of his stories unless their in a different heading to make sure there not his usual. Thanks,Bob!
Fine and well-written story
Obviously it is a wimp story but since it isn't the protagonist we do not get upset! Nicely structured and a
very good idea, on transitions!
Good Story
Good piece of writing short but complete. Thanks for sharing.
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