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Good
Simple, good, but hard.
Bravo
Well done, DG. The ending was inevitable, infidelity is devastating. Thank you a good read.
Another good one DG!
One never knows how your stories are going to end. They can be sure that it is a good read. Thank you for another fine story. Your stories are some of the most true to life on this site.
An avid fan always.
hmmm.
Great story with somewhat of a "cold blooded" response to the child. Of course I probably would have reacted the same way. Any follow ups to this story planned? Like maybe from the wife point of view?
Sort of liked this one
Still it's a shame the women in these cheating stories are always brain dead.
As soon as some guy other than her husband flatters a woman she is instantly on her back with her legs open.
I'll bet there are millions of guys out there who only wish it happened that way.... LMAO
Great story, however...
Story was well written, DG. Concise and to the point.
I think if she would give the bastard child up for adoption (which she might or might not be willing to do), they should reconcile. Even though it would be difficult, Jeff is not going to have a good life away from his wife and kids and he'll end up paying for everything but with no benefits. It would appear that she has learned her lesson. However, he should go through with the divorce first to make sure that she has learned that there are consequences to cheating.
why didnt she abort the bastard
that would have eliminated that problem
she is a whore nothing but
good story.... Think of how many LOVING WIVES writers till would of gone on the "reconcilation express at all costs" train...
Most of them would have.
Let be clear....in this case ADOPTION would not work in sorry GATORHERMIT.... nor would abortion
She told Hubby AFTER she voluntarily and INTENTIONALLY fucked the other guy.
Recall in her letter she says the ONLY reason she is telling hubby is b/c she is pregnant and the gynm guy is NOT white.
In other words she is only telling him -- "confessing" -- b/c she might get caught with a non whiote baby.
PERHAPS if she told him BEFORE she did it something of this marriage might be salvageable. But as events showed when she pulled this little question with Hubby abou "seeing me with another man and you being with another woman" AFTER the event -- only as a cover for the lying deceitful treacherous act that had happened that day.
even if hubby has agreed to it one time she had already fucked someone else behind his back.... the skullduggery wife show here is pretty bad and is too hard to reconcile ....
One of your better stories
I liked this one and it wasnt because the husband left her either. I liked it because there was a believable reason the wife started cheating. A person who was a nerdy outsider suddenly develops and starts getting attention from the beautiful people and it goes to her head - seems like it could happen to me.
The other thing I really liked was that the husband was different (and more flawed/realistic) than most in these stories. Instead of the husband deciding that that he is going to forgive his wife for years of gangbangs and having other guys babies, we have a real person who is unable to get past a one-time mistake. It could be said that she was only confessing because she got pregnant and it was only one time because the guy was a lousy lover, but we dont know that for sure. It is equally possible that she did really make a mistake that there was no possibility she would ever repeat and that she was truely sorry right from the start since she was feeling guilty and tried to get him to be with another woman before she knew she was pregnant.
Instead of a perfect guy and a wife in a hole half way to China, it was nice to see a story about a more believable cheater (i.e. not doing every guy she meets for years and years) and a more realistic husband. Instead of unbelievable amounts of forgiveness from the husband and a basically unredeemable wife, there was a husband who was totally unwilling to compromise even when forgiveness might have been possible/desirable.
Thanks for writing.
PS - I dont think the little blurb at the end was necessary and it detracted from the story. Why did you feel the need to explain the moral of the story at the end? It takes the reader out of the fictional scenario you created and it sounds too much like preaching (or apologizing for how the story ended). Minor thing I guess but it only detracted from the story without adding anything useful imo.
If the story had been written with the roles .....
...reversed your male readers would have been very quiet or would have blamed her
Well done, DG!
I liked the story. The characters were believeable and so was the ending.
Regards, DJ
More Stereotypical Trash
Just like all the black men in here I guess all the skinny guys have to have big dicks too. Just like the stories where the man accepts the woman cheating this story where the man walks out has been told a million times over. Nothing new here.
Another one ....
These "husbands revenge" stories are getting kind of tired. This is Literotica ... nothing whatsoever Erotic about this story. Its just yet another sad tale about a man who's ego is too large to allow him to forgive the one woman he's ever loved at the expense of his children. At least this was a shorter more precise saga then most of these misoganistic fantasies.
Good read
The child was no bastard--just an innocent victim as much as the children produced by this marriage.
Maybe it's just me, but when you love somebody, I find hard to believe that anybody--male or female--would risk it just for something "different." Especially if that marriage is full of love and fullfilling in every way. After all, he claimed they MADE LOVE frequently and it was great!
Yeah, she got what she deserved. It's clear she betrayed him in more ways than one. She would have let it ride if it weren't for the little fact that when the child had been born the truth might come out. That was the second cheat: the temptation to pass the child as his.
DG Hear! Wow!
Talk about, complete opposites. Love it, hated it, sterotype, non sterotype. I love all the comments. I do want to say I try to write about real situations and how real people react to those situation. I want to evoke your emotions, but when voting , please be fair. Hate the characters and how they react. Or love them for how they react, we're not all the same. Everyone reacts differently. Writers take time to come up with ideas and write what they feel. Take the stories for what they are, Free Stories For You To Read!!! Enjoy them, hate them but try and be fair to the writers, They're writing them for you. As always Thank you for reading my stories and comments on them.
DG Hear
I can relate a little to this story
I met a women at a part time job when I was going to college. She did not tell me she was married and at age 26, It did not even come to mind. We became lovers and fucked all the time. We did not use birth control and was only too happy to splash my seed insider her. I fell in love with her only after three months, then she told me the truth. She showed me a picture of her husband and kids, all sitting together. I got really sick and felt horrible guilt. She did get pregnant and our relationship was over. We both left the job and I never did find out who was the father. She stayed with her husband who made a pretty good living, but I am sure she never told him
Good Job
All it takes is one time to shatter a marriage and you showed that very well. While it's all well and good for the advice people to say that with counseling a marriage can survive, when there is cheating the marriage will never be the same regardless of the love still present. I'd rather call it quits then live with less than the whole.
As to all the naysayers about the loving wives venue being nonerotic, they just want a stroke story. There are other venues out there for them. Keep writing. You are in my favorites because I appreciate your efforts and enjoy your stories.
they don't get it
great story and keep writing in your style.those who think this was about ego,need to understand trust and respect for ones spouse.you don't cheat on the one you love.
Two sides....
Now I have talked to some others about this story.
Some think HE's a jack ass. Giving her the 'threat' of divorce unless the child is his...holding it over her head.
Others think she is... cheating and never planning on telling until it turns out she is knocked up.
*sigh*
Now what do I think?
First we DO have a classic 'cool crowd' here.
We have the wall flower that FINALLY blossumed, and now the 'cool kids' are paying attention to her. So she loses it and cheats.
Same thing happens to the dorky (but 'rich') guy who dumps his loving but plain wife for the new silicone enhanced lipo reduced toy. He's FINALLY made IT!
Both are dumb.
Now the key here is .... did she come to her sences AND why?
I think she did.. she wanted him to 'get revenge on her' ... that's guilt. Stupid, but still guilt.
BUT why? If the lover had kissed her, carressed her, romanced her; not just "get those panties off", would she have felt guilt afterwards?
She was acting like a slut and he treated her like one.... so she felt that way.
BUT if she was acting like a slut but treated like a queen, how would she have felt?
We can't open up the minds of the characters (or the author) and find out, but if we look at it... it COULD have happened.
Then when she showed up knocked up, what would she have done?
Rolled the dice?
Felt guilt?
Aborted and continued on?
Left her husband and tried to be with lover...who probally would have ran and gone back home.
It's all in WHY she felt guilt...and notice how she told him about it. It was SOOO bad, his dick was smaller, there was no loving. Leads me to think that IF they guy had TRIED to romance her SOME then she would have been his toy for a while.
She walked into cheating on her husband with NO romance, just 'you are HOT!'
Makes you think.
If he had been 'good' to her then she would have never thought: "I took a chance on ruining my marriage over this big oaf."
Took a chance. She never ment to tell him. A secrect for life.
great marrage and a great wife.
*rolls eyes*
Now has she learned her lesson? Probally..... unless someone takes the time to romance her...then who knows.
Can he risk that?
Can he put behind him the fact that she would cheat on him, cheat on them, cheat on their children....all for what amounted to a fast fuck?
Could you?
Well done
This is a good story from a quality writer. Suffer the queer assholes that criticize your efforts for they are just plain sick and stupid. Only a wimp fag would condone the actions of a cheating slut. She did not say no. She was not forced. She was not drugged. She was not raped. She wanted it and she got what she deserved. She is an adulterous slut. Cheating is cheating. The frequency is irrelevant.
Abort the baby? Not in my lifetime. Why murder the unborn child just because the mother is a useless whore? The other children will be better off not being exposed daily to the lack of trust and pain and loathing of their parents. Never forget: once a cheater, always a cheater. What is a marriage without trust?
Oi Vey
The character is a disgusting human being who is so self-obsessed and self-pitying that he's unable to see beyond the edge of his nose, and do what's best for his kids. They are innocent and defenseless but he happily abandons them. Alimony is not love, it's a token gift. What a disgusting, horrible, awful character.
The writing was.. Eh. Just another of those ridiculous and unrealistic revenge tales, written by people who have never known love beyond a self-obsessed third grader love. So it goes.
it needs more
i loved it but i hope that his love will overcome his anger and they get back together,for the childrens' sake.
ding! ding! ding!
Welcome to real life. Actions have consequences. Some of them are unpleasant.
Yeah, in a perfect world, maybe Jeff would have forgiven her and life would have resumed. But we as humans are not always capable of perfect forgiveness.
-- KVK
Excellent story
Real world excellent story. The husband is a geek but not a whimp. This is so much better than a cuckold story. Thank you for uour efforts.
Reconsile what a buch of bull
All of these people posting that he should forgive and forget take it form someone who's been a good freind to a guy in this position. She almost said if it was white she would have tried to pawn it off as his (that sound like a healthy new begining right there). Here is how it plays out in the real world where he tries to do it the understanding mans way. He goes back to her she applyes gentle pressure for him to adopt and "become a real family again" he agrees really wanting to make it work. Cut to a year and a half later there is almost continual talk behind his back about it and the child is walking reminder of her cheating. He tries but can't emotionaly reconnect its just too hard he feels to betrayed. He files for a divorce so now he still only gets to see his children on the weekends also has to pay for this new child because he adopted it. His wife tries to soak him for as much money and assets as possible because of her residual resentment because she is pissed he could'nt move past it. Basicaly turning the other cheek only got him slapped harder.
Yawn
His wife cheated, had a bastard child, and he divorced her. So what?
Good story DG, but some of the poster are .....
...living in a fantasy world that they don't want to have to live in themselves.
For one I have to agree with DoctorWyldcard and the Anonymous poster below me too. I've seen this happen as well. And when it does the husband almost always loses the respect of everyone (family, friends, strangers, etc) when it happens. And eventually rolls downhill to effect the child too. If the husband can't get past it, its better to divorce and rebuild than try to force the issue because you think its the right thing to do and do further harm to the child. The child is going to notice that they look different than their siblings.
And it always makes me laugh when I see folks who think they are suggesting the right thing to do is for the husband to stay and be a good father to a child of a union like this, but either have not or don't have to live through and witness thier "Good ideas" in practice in real life.
The anon poster below hit it right on the head. The husband in this story, if he had tried to continue the marriage after something like this, would have to try really really hard to get past it, but other people can be really cruel and if he doesn't like fighting all the time he'll have to bear that humliation as well. First the comments start and while he could try to ignore them, he would be putting the child in the middle of trying to make a point of staying to work on the marriage. Its not like he's doesn't already have enough problems dealing with a cheating mate and the child she brought into the world, now he has to deal with public ridicule, jokes, and comments from anyone that finds about the child. The cheating that might have been private now is obvious public knowledge. It's not the childs fault that the mother cheated on her husband and conceived him by another man. But to make it worse it would be "obvious" to most that the child didn't look the same as his brother and sister. Then the husband would be put in the postion of trying to be a good father to a child that he didn't father or looking like a bigger jerk for trying to make it work then failing. He would be put in a no win situation. He's screwed if he stays and fails to make it work, and he's screw if he leaves because the other guy ran off and left the wife as well. But to be honest I've always felt that the only people that condemn a husband for leaving his wife after getting pregnant by another man are those that either they or others don't have to face up to any bad decisions in thier life. Like its someone elses fault they have to pay a price for that decision.
Then there is his relationship with his wife. Sure she might have learned her lesson this time, but what about the husband? He'll have to pay right along with her. When someone cheats the first time the spouse hears about it they almost always say "Not my husband/wife, they wouldn't do something like that to me." But after the first time they get caught, and the couple tries to get past, it if someone later says, even in jest, I just saw you husband/wife making out with someone or I just saw your husband/wife going into a hotel with "X" person, the first thing they think is "My god not again". Why is that? Think about it. Once blanket trust is gone it's gone. You can rebuild to something that both of you might be able to live with, but blind trust is no longer an option.
The wife in this story throughly destroyed it. First she tried to fake her way out of it. Then she lied about it (when the husband ask if the instructor did more than put his hands on her hips she said no. Well that is a partial lie, he had to hold her hips while he was getting busy). Then to top it off she actually thought about trying to pass it off as her husbands, but realized that the dates didn't match so the chances it was her husbands weren't really all that good, so it was only "THEN" that she came clean.
That's not remorse folks. Not when you "only" admit what you've done when there is no other avenue open to you. That's called being trapped into the truth. Some of the posters below are believe they trying to think only of what they think would be good for the child, to not have to grow up without a father, but they aren't thinking that all the way through. They are all for forcing someone else to assume the role when the biological father ran away after getting another man's wife pregnant. Exactly who is that fair to?
Again having seen this happen in real life, I can honestly say that sucks. In real life the husband/wife relationship is toast and they are kidding themselves if they think otherwise when the wife/girlfriend has another man's child and its obvious to everyone around.
-Risq
People don't understand writing
I assume you needed the other guy to be dark skinned so the parentage of the baby was obvious. You could have chosen to have that be discovered by DNA testing but this was your choice as a writer. It made the story simpler and shorter.
You could have gone another way; you could have had her tell him even though the instructor was white, have him work through that she might have gotten away with it and then have the DNA test. That would be a different story you, as a writer, might have done, given your other stories. He would decide to tell her it was his kid even though it wasn't.
My point is each story has its twist. That's what stories are about.
While you usually write very quality
stories that have a lot of humanity in them, this one seemed a little cold to me. There was no interaction, no warmth involved. I usually love your work but this one isn't quite what I usually see from you.
great story
another well thought out story, DG.
an anonymous poster made the comment "husbands revenge" and his ego too large to forgive. can't see where any revenge is involved and as far as ego, what he's doing is acting according to his moral standards. i never viewed forgivness as an 'automatic', some things done can be beyond the breaking point of a relationship.the husband had stated his position quite clearly when she first approached him. how else did you expect him to react after he found out she had already cheated and was pregnant,probably with another mans child?
there's no question that this 'sweet,innocent' wife regrets what she has done,but she sure has a strange way of handling it. 1. she tries to talk her husband into each trying another partner (she already accomplished her mission) just 'to see what its like'. she later states thats was a way to make up to him for what she did(but he would never know that!). maybe thats true but maybe its a way to 'level' the playing field,if he does have another woman,everythings even. 2. she knew in advance what she was doing, she admits it. lover boy bends her over a table. puts the pipe to her,bam,its over. her thoughts? he wasn't very good,his penis is smaller than her husbands,
and " I took a chance on ruining my marriage over this big oaf ". really makes one wonder where this would have gone if he had been an excellent lover with a mighty sword.3.quite simply, she only told the truth when she had no other option.
i like stories with forgiveness and reconciliation,when appropriate.this mans moral standards would not allow him to do that. i don't fault him for that.even if he had been tough and stayed married he would have been faced with a daily reminder of his wife's infidelity every time he sat down to dinner.
i think Risq 001 does an excellent job of describing the ills that can befall trying to live with this child and his own.
DG,as usual,your story got a lot of response and created a lot of debate. i think thats good and puts a feather in your hat ! and,as usual, thank you for another great effort.
don
Great! An old storyline with a unique set up
Very good story line and very believable.
First I respectfully disagree with Kanga40 as I personally find this scenario doesn’t make the woman stupid, but of having what we commonly call, a midlife crisis. She wants or needs validation of her new self from more then just her close friends, most people don’t carry it to adultery but some do. This is one of the most prevalent excuses (I didn’t say reason I said excuse)
As Average-Joe points out her physical development and lack of comparison is a driving force, wrong or right, by many men and women who obsess with an idea till it takes root and then they act on what they feel they want to experience. This is of course a consciously and thought out act waiting for the right circumstance to proceed upon. To feel the need to experience more then praise can be a sign that there is a question of sexual prowess in the mind of the man or woman who follow through with this scenario. Some where in the back of the mind is a question about their sex life or their own abilities?
Gatorhermit’s Comment hit upon a possible solution that could make the marriage salvageable, adoption! For the husband to accept the new child would have him every day of his life see the reminder of the adultery staring him in the face. This would take an abnormally strong man of character who would be able to cope with this situation. There are some people who are this strong, but not many that I’ve met, as there is a lifetime of situations ahead for this couple and their other children. Adoption would be a way of the wife to give all she has to build a new marriage and yet she would have a lifelong pain to confront. Which is more important and what she can live with is what a therapist could help her discover.
Now for the husband he has been wrong for no reason we are given. What he decides to do is also what he can himself live with. In this fantasy story he has made up his mind to divorce and that is very likely as he has the ultimate betrayal of a cheating wife and her having another’s child. This is also a lifetime of pain as he has children with the woman who betrayed him. What ever he decides is not his fault and can not be put on him as a wrong choice, just a choice he can live with.
The act of not telling the truth up front is a normal dilemma that we all have had to think about, and in Loving Wives it is the cruces of what makes great stories lines. The wife acting on the belief the infidelity might be come known, did make a normal but not overly devious decision, as she faced up to the facts and knew she could now be found out. This is what a lot of people feel, that to tell is worse then hiding a fact that will only hurt everyone.
Great writing of a problem that’s done before, but you gave it a different angle, which opens the possibilities to a potential different solution. To this reader you have given us two strong personalities who are living in the real world of flawed human beings.
There have been so many comments since I started this rant this morning and had to leave for a few hours that what I’ve spouted maybe just a repetition of others comments.
Very enjoyable real to life scenario of more people then we care to think.
As Always with the highest of respect
PT
She asked
She asked about one off sex,he said NO but she went ahead anyway.The only reason she confessed was because she thought(quite correctly) that he might notice that the baby was a different colour.He did right to divorce her.
good
A very good story, things may happen this way moretimes than we realize. I woman or a man cheats or wants to open up their marriage so they can cover up the cheating that they have already done.
You can't win
DG:
If he'd kissed and made up you'd have the half who hate this story love it and visa versa. You wrote it the way you wanted to and that's the way it should be. Than You. Ronnie W.
Ditto
Hey DG,
Completely agree with Ronnie. GREAT story. Thanks for your effort!!
perfect!!
newton's law states; for every action there is an equal an opposite reaction. cheat. you pay! what part is hard to understand? if you can't do the time, don't do the crime!
Do commenters actually read the story???
a commenter from nowhere, cleverly spelled backwards, says:
"She asked about one off sex,he said NO but she went ahead anyway."
In the story I read she had already screwed the other guy and was trying to get her husband to screw someone else to square off the ledger. How does the above comment relate to the events in the story????
When he 'lectured' her about fidelity and trust, she decided not to tell him. Then she found herself pregnant and had to tell her husband because she figured he was not the father and the other guy was coloured. No remorse for whatt she did to her husband, only guily obver the possibly dark kid - what an intelligent wife. So, I 'respectfully' disagree with peggytwitty, because if what this wife did was not stupid - as pt asserts, the obviously pt belives her actions to be clever - a proposition with which I cannot agree.
KUDO's Author
Your style and theme is realistically reflective of life, choices and consequence.
In some minds his actions were brutal but in mine they were fully rational. What normal man or woman would do less. This wasn't without consideration or choice. In her own letter, over several days or longer she evidenced passive interest then that night she knew what was to happen but selfishly invited him in. If her stud had been more sensitive and larger perhaps she would be moving to Mexico.
Her excited expectations over came her family commitments as happens to many selfish women and men after all its just once but everything begins with a once.
Author you painted a picture and charaters that were lifelike. Fallible people doing selfish stupid things without long term concern or care but knowing it was wrong.
Your words at the end served a purpose as evidenced by the reader comments proposing reconciliation seemingly at all costs. They still don't get it or perhaps they find themselves in a similar position and were hoping for more leniancy as a sociatal norm.
Men and women so disrespected never recover from the evidence seen so clearly. It follows that most cannot live with a partner who thinks so selfishly and so little of the family commitment once clearly contracted not so long ago.
I guess that unless you have worn the shoes or walked the path you are blind to the likely consequences. That can be the value of such a story as this.
No one deserves or should expect forgiveness as it isn't theirs to give.
Thanks again Author - perhaps a few of the childlike will read and absorb the likenesses of life.
Don't change a thing - With Very High Regard
Yes, she's already PREGNANT
when she was supposed to have been talking in hypothetical scenarios.
much as we'd all "love" to have the marriage saved, so their two kids --- now three, one not the husband's --- this woman (this character or someone, in real life, like her) is NOT someone to be trusted, despite her
pleading: "I will never marry another man." or "I will love you forever"; etc., ad nauseam,,,
see, she is saying something VERY SIMILAR to something she HAD already said when they married: that from that day on they would "foresake all others"
the ONE thing I thought NOT really believable is that someone in HER life circumstances would GO AHEAD with the pregnancy and give birth, when she could have easily terminated the pregnancy: note, morally/ethically, it's not an acceptable solution; BUT so is cheating on your family and husband,,,
she either did not know her husband as well, did not love her husband as much as she said, or she is very very stupid, or all of them. if she had prevented the pregnancy, had made it not possible for it to develop to full term, her GUILT (ove the cheating and over the loss of pregnancy) would be A PERSONAL life experience from which she COULD LEARN; her family would be spare of a life time of a torn home, torn family, etc.
but one stupid decision is ADDED on to another, BOTH of which she erroneously thought her husband WOULD LOVE HER ENOUGH, despite whatever she did or would do, to forgive her for.
fortunately or unfortunately, his level of love and commitment towards her WERE THERE, WERE STRONG, WERE GOOD only when hers matched them; when her's faltered, or when she SEVERED her love for HIM, by fucking around and getting pregnant and going ahead to have the child, NOT wanting to know whether it's his (knowing likely not to be his) --- HIS commitment, his love, his dedication, his trust, his love FOR HER also ended.
that's a LOGICAL way to understand these situations.
you can not "listen" to people's words and their prefessions; you must judge them by their ACTIONS,,, you can not and must not trust some one who, for example, profess all kinds of admiration and respect for you but who piss in your drinking water or soup, when your back is turn, and who smiles at you when you turn around, and continue to profess how much admirable, love, and trust they have of or for you!
but this story is a whole lot more than pissing in your soup; it's even more than "one slip." it is a deliberate act on the wife to fuck around ("this is the only time" is IRRELEVANT as a defense), and to go ahead with a pregnancy, and FINALLY TO EXPECT that her husband ought to love her enough to forgive her,,, things just don't quite add up, no matter how you think about it,,,
Why does the other guy always get off
scott free. The wimp, yeas he 's a wimp even though he says he's not. When she first told him about the pregnancy he should have gone and kicked the asshole's ass real good. Oh the guy was a Mexican....well what's new...Not only does she have an illegimate child but one that will go on welfare and use all us hard working slobs money.
Mexicans and their kids depend on you?
lol
THEY are the ones carrying your on their shoulders, you mean!
from the land of Florida, through the vaste south and southwest regions, through the great and firtile plains of the heartland of America, to the mighty San Juanqin Valley, and in EVERY SINGLE suburb, especially the gated and affluent ones ----- those "lazy Mexicans" and Latin folks are the ONES who make, TOIL long hours in both freezing and 100 plus temperatures, just so idiots like you able to live, have your extramarital sex, and play your stupid Xbox games hours upon hours!
the "woman" in this fictional story, in real life, would have to get her cheating asss out and work to raise the kid, as her husband would only support this TWO kids.
she obviously would have to have her folks to help her babysit, as that's the only way she'd be able to go out and work to pay her the kid, whose only "fault" is to be born to a cheating person of sorely lacking character who imagines herself quite capable, quite loving, quite romantic, quite good as a mother, what-not
don't blame "those [lazy] Mexicans" like a true idiot; why don't you write the AUTHOR and have him MAKE his CHARACTER get out and make a living for her and the kid, RATHER than blaming "Mexicans" [or their kids with cheating white bitches] being on welfare?
What I Love About ...
your stories is the realism. The fact is that Jeff could have chosen another path back to his wife perhaps forgiving her this one mistake. You would have to modify his character and perhap put in his own past failings to temptation. But even if you change the outcome you would have made it realistic by changing the characters which is why I love your stories.
Unfortunately most authors would have written the husband with Jeff's character and the same circumstances but where the husband wimp out to his true nature after a few tears from the wife. I thought her phrase "it wasn't even enjoyable, thinking back on what it cost me" typically of buyer's regret in these situations.
Judy had tried to bluff her way through the cheating and its consequences but lost. Perhaps if she had confessed earlier Jeff might have forgiven her. Also if the child's father had been white perhaps she would have continued the lie and let Jeff raise someone's child.
I have not read the comments but I am sure there commenters who thought Jeff was too harsh and mean spirited toward Judy. The fact is that many men do view their marriage as defined by "forsake all others" otherwise what is the point in a lifelong committment.
SleeplessinMD
i can relate
i can relate exactly how this guy felt and what he went through my wife did the same thing and said everything that the wife said in this story i normally dont leave a comment no matter how much i like the story but this one got me cause' i can relate in the worst way i have to say i like the way everything came out she got what she deserved
I have felt Jeff's pain ...
...even though I am a woman. Just remember that there are more husbands that cheat that wives that cheat - it is just that here at Literotica there is a section about cheating wives.
Each person involved in the situation needs to work out the issues for themselves and hopefully they will consider the long term consequences. In this case Jeff is giving up his family because of one incident. While I know that it is tough to forgive and forget, well you never forget, especially if there is a child born of the affair. While there is the daily reminder through the child if the wife is the cheater, if the husband has a child with his paramour then there is child support and all that goes with it. Oh for the good old days when a husband could not deny paternity!!
The problem is that if there is cheating once, you can never be totally sure that there is not another person at another time. It is so easy to look through the signs of cheating if you do not want to see them. I am still paying the price for my ex-husband's seriel cheating. Caught him with his prick buried in another woman's snatch but I forgave him. He continued, I just did not catch him again for several years. Then I booted him - it is just that I lost a lot in the divorce even if I made out financially. Actually I am glad I waited because our kids were a lot older and they could understand at the time what was happening whereas the first time they were quite young.
The bottom line is - each person has to do what feels right for them at the time but revenge (as Jeff sought) has its price too. The one thing about DG is that you usually manage to create a lot of discussion with your pieces - we must read them critically as opposed to pieces to simply get our jollies.
A Great Story DG
First, thank you for not writing a cuckold story with a wimpy husband. This story had real characters and a believable plot. Why the wife didn't abort the child, I don't understand. It might have been her only chance, with marriage counselling to save the marriage. As it is, lover boy left the country, her marriage is in ruins, and her loving soon-to-be ex-husband hates her. She really made her bed this time. I would like to see something from the wife's point of view, and go farther into the future. Will she look at her child as the physical proof of her infidelity, and grow to hate the child? Maybe give it up for adoption? What will she do with her life, now that her actions have destroyed it? There is a small chance that if she gave up the child for adoption, stayed celibate, and went to therapy, maybe she might get the husband to try again in 3 - 5 years time. There would be major trust issues to deal with, and no guarantee that it would work, or if he would even give her a chance. Personally I would have done only one thing different. I would have insisted on an abortion, then therapy and marriage counselling. Maybe we could get past one mistake, but I would have a post-nuptial document done that confirmed her adultery, and if another instance happened she would give up all rights to marital property.
Great Story
Read through most of the comments have to say a great group of intelligent people (for the most part). DG Hear put together a great read in a very short length.
One thing commenters have not stated is there marriage was very good (strong) or having any "problems". DG Hear showed best to me in story he stated (parapharesed) that they got a babysitter (parents?) to watch kids so they could have a date night. To me this says volumes about the husband and his commitment to a strong marriage. As for the wife DG Hear showed everything she did couldn't have been more wrong to the marriage, family, husband and herself.
One of the good comments was she should have gotten an abortion (don't like) but this would have only made the cheating her own with added guilt for her abortion and might have saved the marriage if he never knew! Just my two cents worth. First Story of DG Hear that I have read will be reading more for sure.
Psycho husband?
When he finds out she fucked the other guy, he *instantly* becomes a crazed rage-filled psycho madman tearing into her with the most profane language and insults. Just seconds before he seems like he merely doesn't understand her and professes his love to her. The character is totally unbelievable and the story line is the same old same old.
i bet she own her next marriage her legs are close
betrayal if not been thru first hand,seen ok until it get to your house.anonymous of USA,YOU TALKING OUT OF YOUR ASS.good story and a real life plot.
Good, but could be better
You are crud of the worst kind. Who gives a shit who the father of that baby was? If your wife has another man's baby, there is not that much difference between raising that baby as your own and that circumstance of adopting another couple's baby and raising that adopted baby as your own. The last time I checked, God made the world in 6 days, rested on the 7th and called what He made "good", and that is the ability of a woman to have a baby from any man, whether or not she is married to him or not. Marriage comes in the form of man-made dogma, therefore any discrediting of a woman from getting pregnant from a man not her husband is also a man-made rule. As a holder of a low-sperm count cock, I would be very proud to be a "daddy" to a newborn baby, regardless of its natural fatherhood.
Lacking in Credibility
It's fine to show cheating has consequences -- although one consequence is a tendentious story. Dave left for Mexico "the day" he heard a woman he had sex with got pregnant? That doesn't sound very believable to me -- he must be a quick packer.
As for the protagonist, he divorces a woman he still loves to prove a point. That might be honorable (although stupid) if they didn't have kids. Now he is just as much responsible for their pain as she is.
The reactions of the characters in this "moral" story about adultery are no more credible then those of the characters in most of the amoral stories about adultery. As Tolstoy discovered in his later life, writing a "moral" story isn't the same thing as writing a good or interesting one. No happy ending for the readers indeed.
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