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Deus Ex Machina Ch. 01: Vincenza

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by Anonymous05/08/06

Heheheh...

Nice set-up, darling.

And you've been read and reviewed on the Story Review thread in AH.

FtF

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by hornyinwv05/09/06

Great Beginning

Can't wait to see where the next chapter goes from here.

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by MissBri06/14/06

Great start...

Well done, darlin'. Looking forward to seeing how the story plays out. ^_^

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by tazz31702/24/12

VINNIE THE PEN

worried for naught. TK U MLJ LV NV p/s for DG. this story could have been carried out and possibly into a sci/fi or horror story. Recall I Robot, mlj

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