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by Anonymous

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by CC0705/15/06

Not sure.....

Good start but no build up..right to smoking and sex in the alley?

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by Anonymous05/16/06

Longer please?

The woman needs to smoke more. The story needs to be longer and more character development.

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by 06/01/06

Smokin'

A nice first submission, Bronze. It got me wet when I fors read it..:-)

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by Anonymous11/30/06

Great

Sure it's short and, I too don't particpate in smoking, but any thrill that leads to a lustful conclusion is great for me. I am new tonight to your writing, but looking forward to reading your other series.
Thanks

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