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by lilliz05/06/08

Very intresting

I love this storyline... I'm not sure if I'm just bias though... I mean it sounds like a little me! My mother was nicer though :P

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by Anonymous05/19/13

More?

Your writing is good and the mystery is there, is there more in the future? Please let there be.

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by Anonymous12/31/13

Unfinshed story equals crapy story!

If you can't finish a story you are a FAILURE. A story that was turning out well too, pity you suck at finishing things. Unless your dead then I apologize.

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