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lillizalmost 16 years agoVery intresting
I love this storyline... I'm not sure if I'm just bias though... I mean it sounds like a little me! My mother was nicer though :P
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoMore?
Your writing is good and the mystery is there, is there more in the future? Please let there be.
Anonymousover 10 years agoUnfinshed story equals crapy story!
If you can't finish a story you are a FAILURE. A story that was turning out well too, pity you suck at finishing things. Unless your dead then I apologize.
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